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Sweet Angel Poet's Dozen

Sweet Angel ~ Poet's dozen sweet angel of mine when I look into her eyes love is all I feel Baby dolls ~ pony tails ~ then her first date Slow down, Father Time. Would you please just wait? In wedding gown and veil, she belongs to another. My sweet angel, grown up, starting a new life. My daughter has a sweet child of her own. Her love cannot be disguised. Soon he, too will be grown. She'll sing no more lullabies. Her sweet angel will always live in her eyes. November 1st, 2015

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Kim Merryman

Date: 11/9/2015 2:42:00 PM

So sweet and so true! Lin, congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim

Lin Lane
Date: 11/9/2015 7:00:00 PM

Hi, Kim...Thanks a lot.

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2015 3:14:00 PM

Lin, Congratulations on your Poet's Dozen win. Love SKAT

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 6:56:00 AM

Thanks, SKAT

Eve Roper

Date: 11/7/2015 1:49:00 PM

Lin, I love the sentiment you have created; good write congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 6:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, Eve. I'm a sentimental fool ;)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/7/2015 10:44:00 AM

Lin, from one mother to another this is beautiful. You expressed a mother's heart very good. Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-)Alexis 7

Lin Lane
Date: 11/7/2015 10:48:00 AM

Thanks, Alexis. There's no bond as strong as that of a mother for her child. I see it now in my daughter's eyes when she looks at her baby son... and thank you for your generous 7.

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/6/2015 10:04:00 PM

A delight to read, with just a tinge of poignancy. Congrats, Lin! hugs!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/6/2015 10:07:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate you're reading this one. Hugs back to you.

Lin Lane

Date: 11/6/2015 8:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Robert. I'm glad you can relate it to your own daughter.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/6/2015 8:06:00 PM

I love this poem-reminds me of my sweet daughter. Congrats on your win my friend. Adding this one to my fav list. Thanks

Lin Lane
Date: 11/6/2015 8:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Robert. I'm glad you can relate it to your own daughter.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/5/2015 6:44:00 PM

Lovely, lovely and sweet and a winner! ... CayCay

Lin Lane
Date: 11/5/2015 9:49:00 PM

Thank you so very much, CayCay

Peter Dome

Date: 11/2/2015 6:12:00 AM

This is so sweet Lin I love it very much. Well done. best wishes. Pete.

Peter Dome
Date: 11/2/2015 11:31:00 AM

Been a real pleasure. you're great. keep penning. here if you need me. Pete.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/2/2015 6:31:00 AM

Thanks, Pete. Sweet, and yet a titch poignant. I'm glad you're visiting my poems today.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/1/2015 5:40:00 PM

Dear Lin Lane Simply beautiful tribute, great entry in the contest this has a warmth of lovely that can't be denide what an awesome work here my friend, and thanks for the review of the gremlins, I prefer wine though, lol take care cheri

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 5:47:00 PM

Different strokes, Cheryl. Let's share a bottle of rose' Thanks for the compliments.