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Sweats and Sweets



The day began with stress, coffee and sex,
Hot sweat was running down my face and back;
Today, our wedding day and we are wrecks.
He gives me some sweet chocolate to snack,
Our love is endless, I tell the kleenex.
My dress is tight, sweating, panic attack!
He gives to me donuts, a big dipper,
But sweet, this love, today and forever.


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May 25, 2015


Poetry/Ottava Rima/Sweats and Sweets
Copyright Protected, ID 05-676-957-25
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 6/15/2015 11:13:00 AM
Richard this was so much fun to write!!!
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Date: 6/15/2015 9:00:00 AM
This is so good!
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Date: 5/25/2015 6:41:00 PM
Enjoyed the ottava rima and your always expessive writing. Agree with mystic rose, you are a winged creature among other superb things!
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Date: 5/25/2015 4:52:00 PM
really love your take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/25/2015 3:48:00 PM
wow, Constance, this has great meter AND is really cute for the theme. I have a different idea for this one. I ought to give it a goooooo
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Date: 5/25/2015 3:48:00 PM
seven!!
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