Constance La France Poet Ottava rima

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Sweats and Sweets

The day began with stress, coffee and sex,
Hot sweat was running down my face and back;
Today, our wedding day and we are wrecks.
He gives me some sweet chocolate to snack,
Our love is endless, I tell the kleenex.
My dress is tight, sweating, panic attack!
He gives to me donuts, a big dipper,
But sweet, this love, today and forever.


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May 25, 2015


Poetry/Ottava Rima/Sweats and Sweets
Copyright Protected, ID 05-676-957-25
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

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Constance La France June 15, 2015 at 11:13 AM Richard this was so much fun to write!!!

Richard Lamoureux June 15, 2015 at 9:00 AM This is so good!

Thomas Martin May 25, 2015 at 6:41 PM Enjoyed the ottava rima and your always expessive writing. Agree with mystic rose, you are a winged creature among other superb things!

Jan Allison May 25, 2015 at 4:52 PM really love your take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2015 at 3:48 PM wow, Constance, this has great meter AND is really cute for the theme. I have a different idea for this one. I ought to give it a goooooo

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2015 at 3:48 PM seven!!