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Sweats and Sweets- a Collab With Olive Eloisa Guillermo


Shooting sighs and moans we fired last night still glows
As tangoed silhouetted shadows hungered love dancing
Peeping breeze outside match our whispers and calls flow
Desiring to dip and sway like leaves our top wanting
Our hands and lips pastel strokes to light brushes show

Two bared torso's touching amidst silken sheets warmed
Daring palms to fingertips send fevers upon hungry hips
Heartbeats stomps and thumps like bass drums stormed
Thrusts and pumps to nerves draw carousels of round trips
Stirring sweats to trail slow on curves adorned

Sweet scented heart lips in nonstop loving caress
As tempos rising aplenty voice fusion fueled cries
Torso's now blossom blessed by their loving impress
Gyration waves ebb after reaching heavenly skies
Legs twine, breaths calm, sated souls fall finesse




©J. A. Fraser and O. E. Guillermo 17.14pm, May 24, 2015

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 4:48:00 PM

both of you has written an outstanding write. hugs Eve

James Fraser
Date: 7/6/2015 1:18:00 PM

Thank you Eve, I love writing with Olive, we've clicked big time through poetry, hugs//James :) :)

Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 9:56:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

James Fraser
Date: 6/5/2015 2:44:00 PM

Many thanks Funom, another enjoyable collab with Olive. A blessed weekend to you, James :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/26/2015 5:50:00 AM

Felt it only right to comment on this as well as I have already done so on Olive's page. What can I say, my sweet and innocent kabayan seems to have taken a higher flight on this passionate collab with you, James :-). 7. Congratulations and hugs to you, both! Kim :-)

James Fraser
Date: 5/29/2015 2:50:00 PM

Hi Kim, writing with Olive is an absolute joy, and our thoughts and ideas simply bounce off each other. Happy weekend to you, hugs, James :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/25/2015 9:14:00 AM

James, a very powerful and passionate write, and you both did a great job 7

James Fraser
Date: 5/25/2015 3:18:00 PM

We both enjoyed writing this one 'Broken Wings' - we bounce off each other with our poetry, hugs // James :) :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/25/2015 6:23:00 AM

I love this; what a fabulous word-painting, you two have penned.

James Fraser
Date: 5/25/2015 3:12:00 PM

Thank you MLK, Olive and I love writing together, and it's our wish to continue writing collabs, hugs, James :) :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2015 5:59:00 PM

I can really see Olive's influence in this one, Tim. The incredible imagery you both produced together. Congrats to you both on your collaboration.

James Fraser
Date: 5/25/2015 3:07:00 PM

The lovely thing about collabs is the ideas that can bounce back between the two poets. Olive and I love this angle to the collabs, and we do indeed hope to write more when possible. Thank you always Andrea for your kind words, but my names James not Tim ;-) can you change me back ;-) smiles :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/24/2015 4:11:00 PM

Huge one, thanks much for writing with me :)! This artistic and playful taunt on imagination which we thought is a nice concept... :)!! Enjoyed writing with you.. ((hugs))~olive eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/25/2015 2:30:00 PM

Let's do it... :)!

James Fraser
Date: 5/24/2015 5:06:00 PM

I enjoy writing with you little one, and so look forward to our next collab. Imagination is wonderful, when two similar minds combine, it's a win win when it comes to writing, and in life. Warm ((hugs)) always~Dino James xx