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I'll don the sweats and give up sweets,
if my reward’s an angel's kiss.
My girlfriend set the goals to meet,
I'll don the sweats and give up sweets.
Her gentle love will be my treat,
she promised me a night of bliss.
I'll don the sweats and give up sweets,
if my reward’s an angel's kiss.
She promised me a night of bliss,
five pounds is all I have to lose.
I feel this is too good to miss,
she promised me a night of bliss.
I have to take a shot at this,
I’ll lose the weight and drop the booze.
She promised me a night of bliss,
five pounds is all I have to lose.
An intertwining Triolet written May 25th, 2015 for contest “Sweats And Sweets”
Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2015
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