Swat By Hands of Spite

Swat by hands of spite,
our sprite 
(unsquelched)
sprinkles from her reserves
to revive a sacred rite;

in her hands,
speckles of if
become when.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 22, 2009 at 8:39 PM
Wonderful, write, Andrew! Just loved, "Speckles of if become when". Well done. For your mail, go to member's area, then at the top where it says soup mail "inbox" click the link. Hope that helps. Donna G.
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January 4, 2009 at 5:10 PM
deep for real and really got me wondering about the definition. FLYS? or what, enjoyed it alot. keep writing as you know. Dont laugh at my poem BABYS....
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January 4, 2009 at 4:38 PM
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December 28, 2008 at 1:35 PM
I read all of your poems and they're EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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