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Swan Song

I was sixteen when the finch stopped singing. The sweet melody suddenly transformed as if it was cracked like a broken bell. I couldn’t hear the sweet song anymore. My father bottled my ink in dirty jars. He locked my pens in the darkest corner of the birch box cut from a tree outside. Maybe it was where the bird sang to me He told me to go outside like other boys. But I didn’t seem to listen. I could still hear a finch singing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/4/2011 4:50:00 PM
This poem reminds me of my own life. I understand what it's like to have parents who don't understand. Congratulations on making it past round 1.
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Gray. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Gary. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:11:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Gray. I enjoyed reading it today. May you have a wonderful weekend and always find inspiration to continue your writing. Love, Carol
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