Swan Song

I was sixteen when the finch stopped singing.
The sweet melody suddenly transformed 
as if it was cracked like a broken bell.
I couldn’t hear the sweet song anymore.

My father bottled my ink in dirty jars.
He locked my pens in the darkest corner
of the birch box cut from a tree outside.
Maybe it was where the bird sang to me

He told me to go outside like other boys.

But I didn’t seem to listen.
I could still hear a finch singing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 4, 2011 at 4:50 PM
This poem reminds me of my own life. I understand what it's like to have parents who don't understand. Congratulations on making it past round 1.
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August 3, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Gray. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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July 5, 2011 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Gary. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol
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January 21, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Gray. I enjoyed reading it today. May you have a wonderful weekend and always find inspiration to continue your writing. Love, Carol
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