Swamp Echo

Writers often wander far
amidst their words – weeds
as well can have beautiful
blossoms...sneezes and watery
eyes, can be a hazard with all
fond images, those prized and
common. Sometimes I wonder
what you saw in me, certainly
no exceptional rose nor orchid?
No Caruso! Maybe a croak or
two above a pond and its frogs:
Lord knows how many times
I have been awakened by my
own swamp echo. I guess, love
will always be somewhat of a
mystery – a bit outside all sound
and visions; somewhere, not quite
the core of a heart, and just 
beyond the outer rings of a
mind. Planets apart, while 
each of us affected by the
other's distance and dizzying 
orbit –

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Date: 1/25/2022 3:59:00 PM
Hello Joe ... enjoyed the comparison. A weed is a plant growing in the wrong place. Similar to many humans in the minds of others - well done Joe - Lindsay
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/26/2022 5:18:00 AM
Thank you, my friend; your wisdom shines! I've gone back and forth between blossom in wrong place, and some unwise weed in good places less attractive for my reckless seeding. I'm certain, someday, God will give me an earful. I will have to grim and bear it like everyone else. I will cop to it. Blessings my friend!
Date: 1/21/2022 7:14:00 AM
Hello Joe, Nothing wrong with loving a mystery. Much meaning and imagery. Thanks for sharing. always ~LINDA~
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/21/2022 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, Linda -- your positive encouragement made my day! Blessings my friend!
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