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Swaddling Blanket Over Nature

The miracle of winter embrace by thy vision. A lyrical canary, a pleasant thrill, Hopping upon powdery snow windowsill. A scene, a crisp brightness full of warm passion. You were the sleepy winter that safely Wrap a swaddling blanket over thy nature, Then breathe, capturing the enchanting feature Those wintry days briskly see. Chimney upon the crown billowing pale white. When each time I exhale a dim veil breath, It appears into the chilling frosty cold air; beneath Spun wondrous amorous scene, a lacy brilliant white. 1/16/2022 Contest: Winter Wonders Within Nature' Sponsored By: M. L. Kiser

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Date: 1/24/2022 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I love the image of a "swaddling blanket over nature"~stunning! :) Paulette
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Date: 1/24/2022 7:39:00 AM
beautifully descriptive Eve...congratulations :)
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Date: 1/24/2022 5:29:00 AM
BIG congrats on you TOP win, Eve. So well deserved.
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Date: 1/23/2022 6:49:00 PM
"Chimney upon the crown billowing pale white. When each time I exhale a dim veil breath" - Very lively. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/23/2022 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful First Place win Eve. Winter seen through the poet’s eye. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/23/2022 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve, on your top win. This is a lyrical piece of writing which flows magically with vivid imageries. The enclosed rhyme is fabulous. Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 1/17/2022 2:04:00 AM
Brilliant write on winter, Eve. I have rarely been abroad in winter and never saw any snow but once only sleet. Huts.
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Date: 1/16/2022 8:49:00 PM
This is a lovely piece of writing, Eve. I especially liked the way it moves along rhythmically, especially the indentions. The inner rhymes are especially nice, too.
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