Suz and Shawna's Cruise

The dancing all night was what Suz
loved most about taking a cruise.
In her beautiful gown
she felt very let down,
for she'd packed only tennis shoes!

The next day a big lizard on a
warm beach crawled on Suz's friend Shawna.
Guys who ogled her bust
tried to say they were just
enthralled by the lovely iguana.


For john freeman's Boisterous Comedy Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 6:34 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in John's contest with this cruising Limerick :)
Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 3:46 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, andrea
Brown Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Lane Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 10:16 AM
Well written and a lot of fun. Tony
Johnson Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:30 AM
Congratulations on your funny limericks and your win, Andrea. Love, Joyce
Dufresne Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 9:49 PM
yeah those iguanas can get pretty mesmerizing sometimes! Congrats to you Andrea
Williams Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 5:12 PM
hey Andrea congrats on a great win David
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 4:23 PM
Congrats Andrea on another terrific win with this witty write .. superbly fun filled luv..
Freeman Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 4:08 PM
Much congratulations on your worthy third place, Andrea. Agape, MOses
Jones Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 2:15 PM
heh... i can SO see this one. Love the write, Andrea and congrats!
Babcock Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 10:40 PM
YUP I can see those guys ogling her bust for that is what guys do . Made me laugh with this witty poem. love Phyl
Sweetheart Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 11:50 PM
very funny Andrea..and oh what an image I got reading it..good luck in the contest.. no never been to Brazil but Las Vegas is as much a party town as a Carnivale' can imagine luv..haha..
Foulk Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 11:40 PM
what a wonderful and creative write. thank you for commenting on Holding on to summer
Susan Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 5:01 PM
2 part funniness! what inspired this? i bet it'll do great in the contest :)
A   Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 12:02 AM
Yes Andrea, I would love to collaborate on a Sonnet with you. Sorry I only have time to check here on the soup every now and than...lol.. and right now it is THAN... hahahhah get it... anyways. I am glad you finally took time to read my poetry. I am like you now.~little time to comment~.. But, tonight I will be here for an hour.. I am deciding on what poem to work on right now.. better get to work.. have a nice one,..p.d.
A   Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 12:02 AM
great limerick as well,..p.d.
Poet Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 9:52 PM
Enjoyed the humour here Andrea.Best wishes in the contest:)
Onclaud Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 5:58 PM
lol, what a whooty rib- tickler.. was this a cup C?... j/kidding!.. winning;s best, heartie!.. huggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 5:48 PM
Very very witty and humorous boast, andrea
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Wonderful witty write....giggles...lovely Lady....with love....old Jack
Horne Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 4:21 PM
LOL, I love this witty write
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 3:56 PM
Hey now this was a really good one so lots of luck in the contest I bet John likes this one.Yes it is long and red but I sure wish I had her name.LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 3:26 PM
Cute one..A pity that Cinderella's Fairy Godmother did not save the day..Good luck in John's contest..I have read some good one..Yours reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
Sivey Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 2:40 PM
Oh Andrea, I'm still laughing! This was an ingenious poem! Thanks for for sharing! Also, good luck in the contest!!
Osita Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 1:58 PM
It's Well penned and humorous! Best wishes in the contest, Andrea
Lane Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 1:28 PM
Good luck in the contest. Tony
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