Suz and Shawna's Cruise

The dancing all night was what Suz
loved most about taking a cruise.
In her beautiful gown
she felt very let down,
for she'd packed only tennis shoes!

The next day a big lizard on a
warm beach crawled on Suz's friend Shawna.
Guys who ogled her bust
tried to say they were just
enthralled by the lovely iguana.


For john freeman's Boisterous Comedy Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/23/2011 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in John's contest with this cruising Limerick :)
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:46:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, andrea
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:16:00 AM
Well written and a lot of fun. Tony
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your funny limericks and your win, Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/21/2011 9:49:00 PM
yeah those iguanas can get pretty mesmerizing sometimes! Congrats to you Andrea
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Date: 8/21/2011 5:12:00 PM
hey Andrea congrats on a great win David
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:23:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on another terrific win with this witty write .. superbly fun filled luv..
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:08:00 PM
Much congratulations on your worthy third place, Andrea. Agape, MOses
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Date: 8/21/2011 2:15:00 PM
heh... i can SO see this one. Love the write, Andrea and congrats!
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Date: 8/18/2011 10:40:00 PM
YUP I can see those guys ogling her bust for that is what guys do . Made me laugh with this witty poem. love Phyl
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Date: 8/14/2011 11:50:00 PM
very funny Andrea..and oh what an image I got reading it..good luck in the contest.. no never been to Brazil but Las Vegas is as much a party town as a Carnivale' can imagine luv..haha..
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Date: 8/14/2011 11:40:00 PM
what a wonderful and creative write. thank you for commenting on Holding on to summer
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Date: 8/14/2011 5:01:00 PM
2 part funniness! what inspired this? i bet it'll do great in the contest :)
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Date: 8/14/2011 12:02:00 AM
Yes Andrea, I would love to collaborate on a Sonnet with you. Sorry I only have time to check here on the soup every now and than...lol.. and right now it is THAN... hahahhah get it... anyways. I am glad you finally took time to read my poetry. I am like you now.~little time to comment~.. But, tonight I will be here for an hour.. I am deciding on what poem to work on right now.. better get to work.. have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 8/14/2011 12:02:00 AM
great limerick as well,..p.d.
Date: 8/13/2011 9:52:00 PM
Enjoyed the humour here Andrea.Best wishes in the contest:)
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Date: 8/13/2011 5:58:00 PM
lol, what a whooty rib- tickler.. was this a cup C?... j/kidding!.. winning;s best, heartie!.. huggs, nette
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Date: 8/13/2011 5:48:00 PM
Very very witty and humorous boast, andrea
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Date: 8/13/2011 5:06:00 PM
Wonderful witty write....giggles...lovely Lady....with love....old Jack
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Date: 8/13/2011 4:21:00 PM
LOL, I love this witty write
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Date: 8/13/2011 3:56:00 PM
Hey now this was a really good one so lots of luck in the contest I bet John likes this one.Yes it is long and red but I sure wish I had her name.LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 8/13/2011 3:26:00 PM
Cute one..A pity that Cinderella's Fairy Godmother did not save the day..Good luck in John's contest..I have read some good one..Yours reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 8/13/2011 2:40:00 PM
Oh Andrea, I'm still laughing! This was an ingenious poem! Thanks for for sharing! Also, good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:58:00 PM
It's Well penned and humorous! Best wishes in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:28:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. Tony
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