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Surviving March Minichu

Seeds dropping off stray blossoms Shaking heads with the cold— A skinny patches' prayer in a garden Instead of frost, dirt's growing pains— That Spring bed throughout Winter's room, Warming color still during the shade Coming woo Bursting my blues Soon Seeds dropping off stray blossoms— That Spring bed throughout Winter's room, Soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/11/2024 5:21:00 PM
A beautiful image of rebirth that fights to start and eventually wins :) Strength is always found in regrowth... :) A.S.
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Date: 4/8/2024 8:24:00 PM
Spring is coming!
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Date: 3/30/2024 4:22:00 PM
i'm not familiar with the form, but i love your vivid portrayal of a march garden :)
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Date: 3/30/2024 4:14:00 PM
A wonderful dedication to the month of March, which also serves to move us into the month of April.
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Date: 3/29/2024 4:28:00 PM
I admire your ability to write not only a Minichu but a lovely one at that. I especially liked these words: 'seeds dropping off stray blossoms that spring throughout winter's bedded room' = a delightful image. I appreciate you and your poetic style. Have a great weekend, Sara
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Date: 3/29/2024 10:59:00 AM
Cute tribute to March as it matches us straight way into April!
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Date: 3/29/2024 4:35:00 AM
Nicely done Page..
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Date: 3/29/2024 3:26:00 AM
Very artistically poetic Paige, lovely :)
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Date: 3/29/2024 2:29:00 AM
You always do minichu so well dear sweet paigez i really love the way youv written this and how youv also phrased lines such as “ Instead of frost, mercy's growing pains— That spring throughout Winter's room, Now warming color on the glades” deep and soulful! Creatively done. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light
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