Surviving An Angry Sea

For sixteen hours the angry sea tossed us like unstuffed cloth dolls.
We were at her mercy, as she flipped us and tossed us.
Most of us were preparing ourselves for death. 
Sending home good bye texts. We recognized our demise.

I did not expect to wake up in the morning.
Neither did the others. We said our good byes last night.
A star came through the storm to greet us in the wee morning hours.
This was my first inkling that we might survive the sea’s wrath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 4:46 PM
What an ordeal, Caren. We're all glad you made it! :-) Bill
Krutsinger Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 1:07 AM
I saw a photo and bam, here was a poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 1:26 PM
Things can look dicey then comes the sunrise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 1:07 AM
A glimmer of hope is all we need, right Kim?
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