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Surreptitious Storming -SOS

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Within the still of the seismic storms, are voices lost of exhausted echoes… Where words diminutively degrade, amidst the condescending copious cyclone; For upon the swarms of silent whispers, mounting with ranting ruins of meadows moss… And in the distance sacrificial screams are heard, thus they faintly fade and are blown into oblivion; Crystalline cries that never shout, passing by arrogant air and egoistical ears… Bouncing off calumnious Cathedral chambers, surfacing on idolized ignominious ignorance; For amongst their desolate drought of will, their testimonial tears standing surreal… Ten thousand neighbors, maybe more, In their difference find their calling; With vaulted voices silent they encroach, for all is quiet in the eye of the storm… And thus their catapultian chatter turns the tides, Surreptitious storms scatter poetic justice thrown. July.24.2019 Sound of silence Poetry Sponsored by: John Hamilton Background music...Sad Violin & Piano Best relaxing instrumental music- 'Rested & Relaxed' With a female virtual voice Placed 7'th...Thank You

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Date: 8/13/2019 5:55:00 PM
WW, I love your magnificent interpretation of the song. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/11/2019 9:10:00 PM
Congrats, WW. Much enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 8/7/2019 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, my friend.
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Date: 8/6/2019 9:06:00 AM
I love it. congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/5/2019 1:57:00 PM
Well done!
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Date: 8/5/2019 12:57:00 PM
This is magnificent writing WW, congrats on a fine placement. This was a tough one to judge!
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Date: 8/1/2019 9:20:00 AM
Wow!
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Date: 7/28/2019 9:40:00 PM
I like how you blended the themes of the song together in this poem with your trademark alliteration. A real winner you wrote! :) gw
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Date: 7/27/2019 12:25:00 PM
WW a winner you have here..."with vaulted voices silent they encroach"
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Date: 7/24/2019 11:06:00 PM
Easily reflect the silence of the majority who has a right to vote not on what they want but on how others want them to. Best for a win.
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