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Surrender

I trembled when I realized his intent
 Bodies clinging, we swam fathoms deep
  surrendering to each other as lovers
   passionately torrid, yet reverently tender

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2024

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

July 29, 2024 at 6:36 AM

Dear Line, Ahh, what a great love poem! So much to say in so few words, you must be a great poet! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

August 25, 2024 at 7:55 AM

Hi Daniel, and thank you for thoughts, but to think I'm a great poet....nah.

July 28, 2024 at 1:50 PM

Nice one!

July 28, 2024 at 1:55 PM

Thanks a lot, Kim.

July 28, 2024 at 1:32 PM

The queen of steam delivers again! :) So much passion, Lin, in so few lines. Cheers - Gary

July 28, 2024 at 1:55 PM

Hi, Gary and I rather like the new title. ;-) Thanks so much for your support and encouragement.

July 28, 2024 at 8:44 AM

Ooh la la…..you made me blush lovely Lin!! Haha ……a gentle romantic poem! Debx

July 28, 2024 at 2:12 PM

You will give me a big head Lin with all the nice things you say!!haha….thankyou sweet friend!! Debx

July 28, 2024 at 1:53 PM

You’re as adorable as your remarks and your blush. Thanks, Deb.

Eileen Manassian

July 28, 2024 at 8:30 AM

Deliciously sweet! Loved this, Lin. My kind of poem. :)

July 28, 2024 at 1:52 PM

Thank you, Eileen. I’ve read your romantic poetry for years and it’s been wonderful incentive for me. Such a comment from you is an honor.

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