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Surrender

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I trembled when I realized his intent Bodies clinging, we swam fathoms deep surrendering to each other as lovers passionately torrid, yet reverently tender

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 7/29/2024 6:36:00 AM
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Dear Line, Ahh, what a great love poem! So much to say in so few words, you must be a great poet! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/25/2024 7:55:00 AM
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Hi Daniel, and thank you for thoughts, but to think I'm a great poet....nah.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2024 1:50:00 PM
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Nice one!
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2024 1:55:00 PM
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Thanks a lot, Kim.
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Gary Radice
Date: 7/28/2024 1:32:00 PM
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The queen of steam delivers again! :) So much passion, Lin, in so few lines. Cheers - Gary
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2024 1:55:00 PM
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Hi, Gary and I rather like the new title. ;-) Thanks so much for your support and encouragement.
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Deb M
Date: 7/28/2024 8:44:00 AM
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Ooh la la…..you made me blush lovely Lin!! Haha ……a gentle romantic poem! Debx
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Deb M
Date: 7/28/2024 2:12:00 PM
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You will give me a big head Lin with all the nice things you say!!haha….thankyou sweet friend!! Debx
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2024 1:53:00 PM
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You’re as adorable as your remarks and your blush. Thanks, Deb.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/28/2024 8:30:00 AM
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Deliciously sweet! Loved this, Lin. My kind of poem. :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2024 1:52:00 PM
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Thank you, Eileen. I’ve read your romantic poetry for years and it’s been wonderful incentive for me. Such a comment from you is an honor.

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