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Surrender

I tread the path shown by my Lord, when in unkind world I’m abhorred, confused, I don’t know what to do. Oh, God I surrender to You. Loss of mother is a great blow, I’m in the debris of sorrow, don’t know how and when I’ll get through. Oh, God I surrender to You. On my way out your dreams I broke, I saw tears your supple cheeks soak, my leaden heart laden with rue. Oh, God I surrender to You. I’ve chased the mirage all the way, in delusion drifted away. Pray help me live my life anew. Oh, God I surrender to You.
December 13, 2019 Contest : In Praise Of God Sponsor : Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 1/20/2020 3:42:00 AM
I am sorry for your loss Subimal. Prayers help way more than many realize. Congratulations on your win with this sincere prayer. Blessings, Connie xxoo
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Date: 1/18/2020 9:24:00 AM
Subimal, you speak of a sad loss. Refrain goes nicely with subject. Congratulations on your placement! Hugs...Kim
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Date: 12/13/2019 12:35:00 AM
Wonderful poem Subminal. Best of luck in the contest
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