Surreal Thoughts

dense fog looms in dawn lurking as unreal thoughts dispeled by sunlight

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Date: 5/16/2017 9:50:00 AM

I love this Haiku.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/16/2017 7:02:00 PM

Thank you Kilalo.

Date: 5/13/2017 11:52:00 PM

I love this Haiku, Nayda, well done!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/14/2017 12:00:00 AM

Thank you Becca.

Date: 5/7/2017 4:30:00 PM

Nicely done, Nayda, I am always walking around in a fog :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/7/2017 7:27:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Date: 5/4/2017 4:37:00 PM

Very good, Nayda. That's how I I feel when I wake up, lol. // Barry

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/4/2017 5:20:00 PM

Thank you Barry.

Date: 5/3/2017 8:19:00 AM

A sunlight haiku ... Multi - dimensional like sunlight ...

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/3/2017 12:18:00 PM

Indeed Probir. Thank you.

Date: 5/3/2017 4:20:00 AM

At least you saw the light.... Well done!!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/3/2017 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Joseph.

Date: 5/2/2017 6:08:00 PM

yes surreal

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/2/2017 7:13:00 PM

Indeed Eye Truth Teller. Thank you.