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Surreal (Reverse Cameo)

Standing Focusing on the sunset I’m awed by the beauty of it Vast colors In an array of splendor As nighttime extends Its arms Reverse Cameo 2,7,8,3,7,5,2 unrhymed

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Heidie Buys

Date: 9/28/2008 7:49:00 AM

So very vivid and beautifully written. Love the ending. Well done. Regards Heidie

Date: 9/24/2008 10:48:00 AM

What a wonderful view. Nice use of personification in the last two lines. This is a new form to me. Thank you for sharing it as well as providing a creative example. It is amazing how many forms are available to convey a writer's thoughts. I printed this out and hope to try it soon. Thank you also for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Charles Fuller

Date: 9/24/2008 7:08:00 AM

Since I've lived here on the Gulf Coast...there is nothing more beautiful that watching the sunset on the Gul of Mexico. I intimately understand and identify with every word. AN excellent poe. My best, Charlie