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Surprise

We decided to surprise grandpa with a party on his birthday. I only want relaxation, rest, fishing, a chance to get away. When we all yelled “surprise!” the surprise was on us He had escaped to the lake to fish, he’s a cantankerous cuss. So we blew out his candles and we ate his cake. We devoured salads, and we each had steak. And he had a great time down by the lake. We learned our lesson, the man is not ever a fake.

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Date: 1/15/2024 10:54:00 AM
That's an unexpected surprise for the birthday party. A fun poem. Well done.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/16/2024 2:15:00 PM
thank you Jeanette

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