John Lawless Poet Limerick

Surf's Up - For Contest

SURF'S UP

It drug the beach sand making trenches
causing lightheaded fainting of wenches
the ocean was icy
he stood out quite nicely
even after allowing for shrinkage.



2/19/2016

submitted to – Limerick Contest II – for fun – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Jan Allison

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Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 12:12 AM John, Congrats on your limerick win. Luv ~LINDA~

Beautiful Scars March 7, 2016 at 10:39 AM John, an awesome limerick! congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *Smiles*

Eve Roper March 6, 2016 at 8:16 PM haha... your humor is always fascinating nice write, John, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve

Susan Gentry March 6, 2016 at 8:09 PM Oh my! Congratulations on... everything! lol

Sarita Milliner March 6, 2016 at 7:56 PM John, John, John, this was funny!!! Congratulations!!

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2016 at 7:28 PM yours was very good sample of limerick humor. Congrats.

Barbara Gorelick March 6, 2016 at 6:18 PM Congrats funny guy. BG

Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 6:05 PM absolutely hilarious John :-) congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy February 22, 2016 at 8:44 AM This is so funny, John! Well-written too. Janice

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2016 at 9:39 PM Another good one for Jan's contest. Was this King Kong? heehee

Daniel Turner February 19, 2016 at 3:47 PM Very funny, John. It make me chuckle! Good luck and Peace

Barbara Gorelick February 19, 2016 at 12:08 PM Oh for Petes sake, where was I ..I miss all the good stuff. This is hilarious, even allowing for shrinkage. BG John Lawless February 19, 2016 at 12:38 PM He's an early riser.......