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Supplicant At His Feet

In the shade of the celestial covert, quite inviting, resonating a flow through the earth comfort. The vibrating strings deliver nature’s music surge, a sink, and rise medieval lyric fluidity of soft floating harp sound. Softest of feathers, lightly wound, outpouring motion of hovering rare coloured birds' flawless, untamed wings. To arouse the beast that lies in supplicant at his feet does not stray, sung asleep with lullabies. A spirit of fraternity, forged by time, love and care of creation for eternity. 10/7/2017
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La France Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Eve, congratulations on your top win in Brian's contest, well done !
Haight Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:24 PM
Eve, congratulations on your First Place win for this beautifully written poem! Hugs, Sandra
Ajmal Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Your poem's topic certainly catch my eye and I am glad that I come across this one, this one sure is a beauty, many congratulations on your top win in the contest
Gentry Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 11:01 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 9:36 PM
Beautifully penned, Eve. Congrats on your top win.
Pretorius Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Eve, you've captured the essence of the picture.
Carber Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Congrats Eve, on your win in Brian's contest
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:30 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve.
Gupta Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 12:54 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your nice win with this beautiful poem ...
Murray Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Back with that big hug Eve. Well done.
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Eve - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)
Smith Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:41 AM
Congrats Eve :)
One Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:34 AM
I liked your title and as Andrea mentioned, you were inspired by that painting, even though you told me you do not really like it... You wrote an amazing poem, with some wonderful soft and flowing lines.. A very beautiful poem.. and lovely ending.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 9:20 PM
I want to focus on his love of music but need to think of a form to use!
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 9:20 PM
wow, you were SO inspired by the picture. I wish something like this would come to me!! A sure winner!!
Murray Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 4:35 PM
Amazing depiction Eve. A winner for sure.
Sivey Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 5:49 AM
What a wondrous write my friend! I loved the way you rhymed this one, very nicely done! The picture is perfect for this poem, you have delivered quite a significant piece, one full of mysteriousness and tranquility! What a delight this poem was to read this morning, Great Work!!
Manassian Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 2:13 AM
I loved how you worked the tale of this painting with apt words, Eve. Spirit of fraternity between humans and beasts is a good theme for this piece. Love and hugs
Shaw Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 4:42 PM
Thou art a Wordsmith Eve Roper, Shakespeare himself would have loved this. You captured the painting beautifully, Regards, Kevin x
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October 7, 2017 at 3:42 PM
- An excellent poem, dear Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 2:11 PM
I enjoyed reading the soft rhythm and flow of this poem--well written, Eve--best for a win!
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