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Superstition

Friday the 13th, and dark clouds rise There is superstition in her eyes Will she venture out and test the fates Or hide behind her iron gates Her lover left, he won't return She thinks the gypsy queen will bring him back Magic spells she can't discern Her superstition is right on track On Halloween she's on the street A witch's brew, her tasty treat She is caught up in a bind Superstition is on her mind

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Jim Healey

Date: 4/17/2025 9:49:00 AM

Nicely done, Joseph. Congrats. J.

Karen Jones

Date: 4/17/2025 12:47:00 AM

Joseph congratulations on your win in my contest! Your entry was a fun read! I appreciate your supporting and hope you have an awesome day!

Joseph May
Date: 4/17/2025 4:56:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Karen

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/3/2025 10:45:00 AM

Good one Joseph. Interesting and fun to read :)

Michael Tor

Date: 4/1/2025 1:18:00 AM

Joseph many say they are not superstitious but they don't walk under a ladder lol. Enjoyed reading this fun write of yours...

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/31/2025 9:51:00 AM

I can only say I'm not superstitious. Yet I am careful with ladders. Don't want paint on me :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/28/2025 10:53:00 AM

Well written! Enjoyed!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/28/2025 10:03:00 AM

I enjoyed your fun "Superstition" write. Friday the 13th have always been great days for me. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............