Supernatural Beauty 50 Contest

I like the way you are made
God’s gifts perfectly displayed
That kind of beauty will not fade 

Embrace who you are don’t be sorry
You were not made to be ordinary
Let the world witness extraordinary

she is pretty
in a unique way
why can she not see it



Hi Caren

This is for your 50 or less contest.
I went to your “The I am Sorry People” for my inspiration.
As part of the poem at the end there’s is a questionku.
To add to the challenge I made my poem exactly 50 words.

Thanks for hosting these contests. ;0)
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Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 3:55 PM
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder so they say. Sometimes parents make the mistake of not uplifting their daughters so they have good self-esteem on the inside and on the out. I enjoyed reading this one. Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for you dropping by my page. Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 6:00 AM
My pleasure, thanks for such a thoughtful comment and visit.
Thomas Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:09 PM
This poem haa so many beautiful facets from which to see it. I especially appreciate the Questionku at the end. Hello Rick :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 10:20 PM
Hi Flo, so nice to see you. Hugs Rick.
Y. Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 9:57 AM
Hi Richard, I loved the message in this write. As I person who struggled with low esteem, I found your poem to be encouraging and inspirational.Because it reminds one of where true beauty comes from. We all must embrace that "inner" beauty. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 10:10 AM
Hi Alexis, I have yet to meet a beautiful woman who does not struggle with self esteem. They are looking in the wrong place. Mirrors will never be the the accurate measure of beauty. We need to help our daughters, wives, friends and girlfriends see the important things.
Delaney Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:09 PM
I love this one, congratulations on your win. SuZ
Lamoureux Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 6:01 AM
Sorry for such a late reply. Thanks for the visit.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 11:47 AM
Cool poem, Richard. The bold flair of infusing high self-esteem to another is best friend worthy of much ink respect. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 1:49 PM
My pleasure Freddie.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 11:48 AM
Btw ... Ty for the keen eye on my poem, "Ascending Deciduously," Richard. You're the best, pal. Love and joy forever.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Hey I did not even see that extra note until right now. I never know who is placing in my contests because I do not want to know. Glad you did!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 8:36 AM
Thanks Caren. ;0)
Raven Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 10:23 AM
Hi Richard, wishing you all the best in this contest with this wonderful write. I see congratulations are in order Richard. belated congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent little write. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 12:07 PM
Thanks again Mike. Blessings Rick.
Dutta Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Nicely penned. All the best.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 12:07 PM
Thanks Anisha.
Situation Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Face it , some women just have it.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 9:08 PM
That is true. In fact most do, they just haven’t embrace their unique brand of beauty.
Adams Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations Rick, this is beautiful...i don't think most people see their worth, not through their own eyes anyway...i remember when you first introduced me to the questionku many years ago... love this...great penning and very deserving of the win :) hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 2:34 PM
Thanks Sandra. Hugs Rick.
Ball Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 12:11 PM
Well Done Richard. This is a winner for sure. God Bless, JB
Lamoureux Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 2:34 PM
Thanks Judy.;0)
Theraven Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 11:54 PM
Richard, I love a good turn of a phrase. And you did it with only fifty. Left to wonder why beauty is perceived in the mind's mirror so skewed. -Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 6:07 AM
I have met many woman who are not able to see how beautiful they really are. Thanks for commenting.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 5:27 AM
You are most welcome my friend. I am glad to see that you are one of the winners. I never know until the end. I choose to not know and I go RACING to the Winners to see - surprised every single time!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 6:49 AM
Me too Caren. I always hope that someone new is on my list. Hugs Rick. Also it is nice to see friends on the list as well.
Y. Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Hi Richard, Your poem is uplifting and encouraging. I like how you ended it with your form. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:59 PM
Thanks Alexis, much appreciated. ;0)
Perrin Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem Richard :-) x
Lamoureux Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Thanks Elaine. ;0)
Mchattie Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 8:59 PM
So true my friend. Everyone is precious. Have a great day my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Thanks David.
Chiri Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 12:49 PM
Rick your talent simply amazes me and brings a smile to my face! Always a pleasure to read you!;)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Thanks Brenda, Hugs Rick.
Chiri Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 12:49 PM
Oh congrats are in order too!;)
Rose  Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 3:17 AM
Very wittingly done, congrats on your win Richard, & have a great day.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 6:35 AM
Thanks, you too PD.
Manassian Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 2:13 AM
I see congrats are in order for this lovely piece, Richard. I'll join in the applause. Loved the theme. Loved how you brought it to life. Blessings. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 6:35 AM
Thanks Eileen. Hugs Rick.
Adams Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 7:45 PM
congratulations Rick on a very deserving win... this was wonderfully penned :) hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 6:38 AM
Thanks Sandra, blessings Rick.
Canerdy Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 7:57 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Richard. Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 6:39 AM
Thanks Janice. ;0)
Blodgett Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Congratulations Richard. True words well expressed. Lonna
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 6:44 AM
Thanks Lonna, ;0)
Wolf Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 2:51 PM
Richard, if men are proud of their physiques, why can't women be proud of theirs?! I like this poem a lot! Congrats on your win in the contest. Cheers, Gershon
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 6:48 AM
This is more to do with the beauty that transcends the physical or perhaps the rare combining of both. Thames for your visit Gershon.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on your Second Place win with this amazing poem Richard. A superb ending! xxooo
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 6:49 AM
Thanks Connie. ;0)
La France Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Richard a wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in the contest!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 6:59 AM
Thanks Constance. ;0)
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