Super-Hot Sunday (Spaces)

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                He's trying out that new-fangled deep fryer for Super Bowl 


                The third firetruck arrives at Half-time




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For Brian's "Spaces" contest
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Culverhouse Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 5:20 PM
funny, congrats on the win!!
Goff Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:57 AM
oh, I am having fun with this winner, Carrie! this kinda fun is what makes the soup so cool! and you too! thanks and CONGRATS! jimbo
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 5:58 AM
LOL! LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!Congratulations Carrie, on your Honorable Mention in the “SPACES” poetry contest sponsored by: Brian Strand. This is a hoot! I can see why you are in the winners circle! Smiles, Dane Ann LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!
A  Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 7:57 PM
SOMETHING A TIPCAL GUY WILL DO....WITH MEN NEVER EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED....I.T.
Parrish-Spence Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 6:22 AM
This is so sad yet funny because it reminded me of the time my cousin tried to fry a turkey in his backyard. Fire - oh hes. Good poem.
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 8:43 AM
also, one of my favs. Dang, some of my favs did not get on the top, but there were WAY too many entries to give first places to the many deserving ones!!
Crisci Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's contest Spaces...I love this write, it is so humorous! I wish continued success and may God bless you. Have a wonderful Valentine's Day. Love and hugs, Andrew.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 4:40 AM
Carrie, I loved this one! It really made me laugh, being the kind of cook I am, that dinner is ready when the fire alarm rings. So glad it was a winner. Connie
Haick Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 7:40 PM
Hey Carrie, you are blazing these contests with your great poetry! My congratulations on your win in Brian's Spaces" Contest! Great job! Peace, love, Audrey
Fraser Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 1:21 PM
Excellent Carrie, made me chuckle big time, many congratulations on your success in Brian's fine contest >> James
Mcgovern Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Carrie, you are just too funny. Congratulations on your well deserved win. I am still laughing.
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 10:36 AM
Of course this would be a winner. I love it. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Congrats on your winning poem in the Spaces contest.. an amazing write for an amazing win.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Dufresne Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 4:59 AM
this is so funny,Carrie. Congratulations!
Clark Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 3:51 AM
LOL LOL I Love It!!!!!! Congratulations on your win Carrie!!! So cute!! Love Jeralynn
Brown Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 3:26 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 2:37 AM
I love this one, Carrie! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Ryerson Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 2:21 AM
Hilarious!! - Congratulations on you win - Tim
Moreno Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 1:29 AM
Carrie, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul
Strand Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 12:40 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'SPORT'S MAD ?' is now open.
Hickman Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 9:57 PM
a very daring piece and of course so funny,,hope the third fire truck was successful,,I would hat to see the loss of grill food and a good grill,,,and good luck in the contest,,,and Thank you for all your visits and for all the wonderful comments you leave behind,,,Blessings..cecil
Johnson Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 11:18 AM
lLWow!! I hope he was using it outdoors. Great one Carrie. Thank you for your comments on my latest posting. You are always so good to read us. Love, Joyce
Keogh Jr. Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 9:35 AM
Ha! Nicely done. And timely and topical! Well, Miss Lennon, you beat me , but I'm glad. You are always so nice and you are a true talent. I was honored to win second! I would like to see more contests like that. They are a challenge and they bring out the wsit in everyone! Regards, Gerard.
Jordan Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 12:22 PM
Carrie my neighbor, I had to stop in and say hello. You certainly cracked me up with this one. I needed a good laugh! I reckon I should move my deep fryer a little distance from the garage to fry up my shrimp today. You have a wonderful day and know I forever hold you in my prayers, YF4L, mj
Guzzi Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 5:27 PM
I'm not going to FLA. dear HE is...retiring there...oh well maybe I'll go for a visit in the spring? PS so far on the image I give you #1 no kidding! HUGS
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