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The gentle flow of her virgin gown in the dark water where she would drown wrapped gently around her ashen face a wonderful lover's death embrace. Embrace this great man, her mother told; gowns, extraordinary things of gold; drown you, child; he will with treasures so; face it, good girl, you'll not find your beaux. So she leapt as others have, and will.

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Date: 3/31/2025 4:07:00 PM
This melancholy verse is captivating and beautifully written.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/1/2025 8:27:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 3/31/2025 2:44:00 PM
Your imagery is outstanding. The piece is hauntingly beautiful...oh, the external expectations and constraints...
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/1/2025 8:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Mickey

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