Super Grouper, Sardine Party Pooper

Scuba diving, oh! what a dream
In the Gulf, amidst the Sardines
With a Florida blond
Whom I've grown to be fond
It's dark, is it all that it seems

Our dive is going oh! so super
Boo! said the nosey big Grouper
Och! do you have to be mean
To these little Sardines
Your just a big party pooper

Told of he goes in a mood
Just like a big bully should
Hey! next time take better care
To these Sardines you did scare
It's impolite, and you've been oh! so rude
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 7:37 AM
James, Great to see in the winner's circle. Congratulations on a swell poem. Agape, Moses
Maverick Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Good to se the winning spot you have taken in Carolyns contest James.
Dufresne Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 5:41 AM
congratulations on your win here James. Good one
Horne Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 11:16 PM
LOL, Congratulations on all your wins, James : )
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 3:10 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of carolyn, James
Devonshire Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 2:35 PM
Dear James, I judged blindly and was so happy to see your name on the winners' list. Competition was awesome so feel proud. Congratulations! Fishing photos are posted on my blog. I kept looking at the sky hoping to see an eagle or and owglet passing by... Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 5:28 PM
Hiya Blondie, I'm glad I entered this one. Not to be placed 5th, but purely because it's your contest Carolyn. The result for me was you enjoying yourself, having awesome fun in doing what you love - fishing. Your back safe, that makes me smile - have a terrific weekend.....:) xxxx
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on your so wonderfully deserved win in Carolyn's "Attack" contest James. Love Carol
Johnson Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 1:40 PM
Congraltulations James and I am glad that you and the blonde got away unscathed. Love, Joyce
Dailey Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 4:32 AM
Scuba diving, I tried it once I took to it like a brain to a dunce
Roberts Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 6:36 PM
love it!
Mehta Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 5:24 PM
You have taken quite a humrous perspective on the theme, James
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