Super Fly Spy

On the wall of a house I might be
Owned by *Brangelina Jolie.
There’s no real reason why.
I’m just one nosy fly.
Not to mention, Brad nude I might see!

House to house in each fine neighborhood
I’ll spy like a super fly should.
An “enquiring” mind,
Lots of scandal I’ll find.
As I fly over all Hollywood.

When I tire of the “stars,” I’ll fly to
Any place juicy plots might ensue.
Just beware. Flies like me
Are as sly as can be.
Right now I am looking at you!

*Brangelina refers to the coupleship of Brad & Angelina
I'm assuming they are still together?

For the Contest by Michael J. Falotico:
"A Fly on the Wall"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/24/2014 7:23:00 PM
A very creative take on this topic. Did you get Roy to check it for you before you posted it.
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:32:00 PM
i wonder if they are together now, hey, love these, wish i was fly sometimes, at least i may get to see some tps poets around the world.....
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Date: 1/28/2011 6:34:00 PM
Oh what a read.My grandbabies ar my everything my oldest is 15 and youngest is 9.soupmail.~LUV~Teresa
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Date: 1/28/2011 1:04:00 PM
too funny!! I love a little comic relief in limerick form
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Date: 1/28/2011 12:06:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material for sure..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and commenting..Sara
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Date: 1/27/2011 5:10:00 PM
This is a very brilliant write!Enjoyed --Goodluck in the contest--kashinath
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:49:00 AM
Hello Andrea, Wow, this is great! U come up with the most wonderful expressions. Pause for thoughts. I love it so witty and funny. Have a wonderful week my friend As Always Shar
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Date: 1/25/2011 9:21:00 AM
Funny and well written Limericks, Andrea. I think tehy are still a couple. Thank you for your kind comment on "In Search of the Stetl". To answer your question abou a "Shtetl" : A Shtetl wa a small Jewish town in Eastern Europe befor the Wars and all this sadly vanished due to history. What a loss!!! Love, Gert and of course wish you best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/25/2011 3:19:00 AM
hehe, oh my word, I love this one.. Take it from this fly they are still together lol.. enjoyed your limerick for the contest.. I am sure Michael will enjoy them as well ;) love Wilma
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:32:00 AM
I forgot all about that rating box, Andrea. Thank you so much for giving me a 7. I really didn't think the 7 was a rating at the time, but I was curious - knew you would respond. Amy says I shouldn't be writing about the horrible winter if I hate it so much. Better not send her my latest, "White." Love, Dave
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:18:00 AM
Oh to be a fly for just a few minutes and to peer in on Angelina, even if she is fully clothed. Hey! I like this poem MUCHO! Love, Dave
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Date: 1/24/2011 5:18:00 AM
Oh yes Andrea.. that Brad person sure does the trick in TROY.. with those golden locks and that bod that won't quit..hahahahahaha.. Ron is jealous.. for his hair has waved bye bye and his physique is pretty close to Brad's but not quite there ..hahahahahaha....
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Date: 1/23/2011 3:27:00 PM
I guess being a fly on the wall would be easier that a mounse in the corner..anyway..I would walk on hot coals to see Brad in the altogether..well maybe not..but it does make the saliva run...shame on me. Nice choice my dear..BG
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:26:00 PM
hello, Andrea.. another great entry.. good luck in this contest.. gosh i forgot about this contest.. this one is kind of funny by the way.. do you really think.. they spy on eachother if that is what you mean.... by the way... i think.. i will buy me a fly swatter now... i won't trust them flies any more.. anyways.. about that movie.. i was going to ask you if it was low budget.. lol.. guess it was... my next thought was.. that it was old.. but, thanks for letting me know... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 1/23/2011 12:44:00 PM
An awesome idea and write Andrea.. luv that fly and who would not want to see Brad in the nude.. just watch TROY and he is there is all his glory luv.. I watch it a lot..haha.. good luck in the new contest.. Michael will surely luv..
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Date: 1/23/2011 11:54:00 AM
Yes, they're still together as far as I know, Andrea. But I think I'd get jealous watching them together. Clever take on the contest. Wishing you success, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2011 10:55:00 AM
THanks for you comment on my work. I wish you luck in the contest. Take care, Papagallo
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:21:00 AM
I think they are still the most happy couple in Hollywood and my favorites, Andrea
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:20:00 AM
Get my fly swatter and a can of Raid. Nice set of limericks you have here.
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:17:00 AM
Funny one there! Soup Mail Light & Love
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:15:00 AM
oops you said prince, not son- ok prince it is-- btw replied to soupmail :D
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:08:00 AM
Hahahahahaha you definitely had me laughing out loud with your comments-- you Definitely would have whacked me on the head if I was your opponent-- Ping! Pong! on my head haha! & darn the yogurt didn't set? bugger! love ya, superfly :D & haha I got the same shock myself! will leave note to prodigal son to drop by that write of mine O_o hugs :)
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:38:00 AM
heehee! haha what I would give to be your partner super fly, Andrea ;) -- very witty and I enjoyed all of your limericks --wow 3 of them-- you are on a roll!! -- haha btw I just looked around me-- no flies!! but aack I just remembered --the yogurt!! have to check on it!! haha I made yogurt and forgot about it O_o gotta run first-- hugs nikko :)
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:35:00 AM
whoot, andrea!! this is fast as i didn;t know there was a new contest going on... enjoyed the sly humor of all!! hit it big-time on the winners' list!! :) huggs, nette
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