Sunuva Beach Gawk Teaser

A teenager searching for gold
Saw a girl whose tattoo was bold
It read, "You are here!
The treasure is near!"
But as he grew hot she grew cold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Canerdy Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 7:45 PM
This one is just right, Rico! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 3:31 PM
good one!
George Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 7:07 PM
So the gold tattoo will not be sucked away. She is clever !
Cunningham Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Lol what a letdown Love the title.
Leffanta Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 10:48 AM
I thought about, "Gawk Tea, Sir?" for UK readers, but decided Jan could do a better job of that! Aloha!
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Good one, Rico, enjoyed, Blessings ~ Debra
Leffanta Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 10:47 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!
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