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Sunuva Beach Gawk Teaser

A teenager searching for gold Saw a girl whose tattoo was bold It read, "You are here! The treasure is near!" But as he grew hot she grew cold

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Date: 4/11/2022 7:45:00 PM
This one is just right, Rico! Janice
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Date: 4/11/2022 3:31:00 PM
good one!
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Date: 4/10/2022 7:07:00 PM
So the gold tattoo will not be sucked away. She is clever !
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Date: 4/10/2022 3:19:00 PM
Lol what a letdown Love the title.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/11/2022 10:48:00 AM
I thought about, "Gawk Tea, Sir?" for UK readers, but decided Jan could do a better job of that! Aloha!
Date: 4/10/2022 12:55:00 PM
Good one, Rico, enjoyed, Blessings ~ Debra
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/11/2022 10:47:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!

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