Sunshine Sonnet

Suns soft sensual soaking silhouette
slowly sneaks silently the silky skin
Oppulent orifices ooze olive sweat
Reprising rhythmic rouge romance akin

Saturated salt smelling skin spilling
frothy fragrant fire ferociously
Capricious calm converts to cool chilling
Precipitation paid precociously

Heartwarming henotic humble heat haunts
harmed human hearts hypnotized happily
Gleaming glowing glare gravitating taunts
of liquid love long lost unhappily

Precious precocious sunshine come hither
Need your lava lifeblood not to wither
3/13/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 10:34 PM
Well, I can see why this won. I'd go so far as to say, Oo la la. Love this alliteration and how you've brought it together. Belated congrats on your win with this poem Donna.
Roberts Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Thank u
Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:02 PM
A fun sonnet, Donna. Congrats.
Roberts Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Thank you Line
Hamilton Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 10:59 AM
Amazing alliteration, congrats Donna on a fine win!
Roberts Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Thanks John.
Smith Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Beautiful Donna
Roberts Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Glad u enjoyed
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