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Sunshine Man

In the sunshine, surrounded by light and warmth Waves crashing on your shore Surf into our lives again to encourage Caring soul, poetic spirit Smile, let the pearls glisten in the azure sky light Words flows fluidly, oozing from your persona! Crashing in the ripples of the soup. For my friend Ruben Ortellao, for all the encouragement you have given me and others!! (hope it makes you smile)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/7/2010 3:36:00 PM
Hi Doris, Thank you for your kind critiques on my latest poems they are warmly appreciated, I am touched by this write of yours I just wish there were more people in the world who care like you do, Because I can see that you have a beautiful loving kindred spirit in you,Please keep your creative pen flowing And I will attempt to return often to grace your new pages in poetry. Have a fantastic day and night, God bless you always. Dean
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Date: 1/5/2010 7:14:00 PM
Awesome write! Great dedication to Ruben, Doris! Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.
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Date: 1/5/2010 4:55:00 PM
Nice dedication Doris, Ruben is a good friend of mine...Raul
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Date: 1/5/2010 1:53:00 PM
Lovely tribute to my dear Ruben,He liked it,He is jumping like a kangaroo:)He is the Sunshine,Infact He is the Moon too,lol;)..His Words are pearls..and His comments are always unoque, He is even my best shell for comfort..Im going to put this Gem with my Favz,Charma
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Date: 1/5/2010 4:15:00 AM
a heartfelt tribute to Ruben, nicely done, Doris! I do hope you will have a happy year ahead. Thank you always for you comments. I feel quite comfortable in my new flat and I like the place. Zittau got about 29 000 inhabitants and ist the most south-easterly town in Germany only footsteps away from Poland and the Czech Republic.
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Date: 1/4/2010 10:20:00 PM
My goodness, I just five min. ago posted a reply to this one, came here by mistake and see my reply is not here! Must have done something wrong. Anyway, I think rueben will be so pleased you penned this for him, and I love that last line. LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/4/2010 9:06:00 PM
Yes, Doris...it will certainly make Ruben smile...like it made me smile! This is a very inspiring and lovely poem. I thank you for all your kind comments throughout the year and I wish you and your loved ones a very Happy and Prosperous New Year! Kindest Regards, Andrew.
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