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Sunshine Eats Its Armor

Sunshine Eats Its Armor


Night is an old fish
deep in a dark sea
racing ever upward,
emerging into light

slow to eat more
yet steady as she goes
ever changing its tails,

seeking life anew
anticipating,
a future never known,

breaking against all
speeding into a mist
longed for by many,
desires on every list

Night is a new fish
racing down to flee
sunshine eats its armor
deep, dark it wants to be

Robert J. Lindley

note: A little free verse tonight. Even as I try, poetic  rhyme still sneaks in..
like a dog chasing a juicy bone..lol

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/25/2015 6:11:00 PM
Wow!.."real" poetry...keep it up Robert...nice pen...Peter
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Date: 12/31/2014 7:45:00 PM
Deep poetic piece, Robert. The metaphoric journey of night is greatly entertaining, and true. Great expression overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:14:00 PM
truly outstanding pen robert love how you painted this piece bless you
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Date: 11/28/2014 7:57:00 PM
Thanks my friends. Strange musings have plowed my dark fields as of late.... Darkness stalks my heart. I slap it away only to see it returned with friends. My blade flashes , it races away for months. Yet life says all is well. Ignore those raging knocks from hell. A wolf must not be friends with the sheep..
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Date: 11/28/2014 6:03:00 PM
Very well expressed piece Robert, great metophor for day and night.
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Date: 11/27/2014 8:14:00 AM
Wonderful point made in this one..I enjoyed reading it this morning..I am glad that I chose it as one that I could read today..Sara
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:12:00 PM
Robert, A great write here My Good Friend!! I like the pace of this verse as you build out your imagery. With the "ever changing its tails" for some reason "fins" jumped into my mind and I thought "JAWS"!!! -- And then I thought, this cannot be so. Leave it to me to thing something like that HA HA!! This one is a very compelling thought-rendering verse, with the telling contrast between the Old Fish . . . New Fish. A Definite "7" on this Robert, and a FAV, so I can return to it. Best!! Gary
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Date: 11/26/2014 5:20:00 AM
Love the images here! Very creative.
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Date: 11/26/2014 12:14:00 AM
I know the feeling and how poetic rhyme always sneaks in no matter what you do. this is REALLY imaginative. I like it a lot.
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