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Sunsets In the Ocean

Waves crashing in the sand Lulling my thoughts away In their peaceful and quiet rhythm In their own calming way Feeling the sand on my feet Smelling the ocean breeze Enjoying this quiet moment In this place where i can just be Watching the sunset in the ocean Feeling it's warm touch It's beautiful and vivid colors That makes me feel so much I wish i could sleep here Under a starry sky In this beautiful paradise beach Watching sunsets and sunrises... *** October 23, 2016

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Date: 12/12/2016 11:53:00 AM
I come sleep with you there on the beach, perfect.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/12/2016 3:16:00 PM
Yesss, we can do a sleep over on the beach! I'll love the company!!!! :*
Date: 12/11/2016 2:26:00 PM
Such a beautiful descriptive poem - It sure sounds like paradise to me Claudia!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/11/2016 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Jan!!! I love to go to the beach - we've such beautiful ones here... Hugs :* :)

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