Tim Smith Poet Imagism

Sunsets Beckon

Off to catch her beauty
where smiles illuminate my dream
sunsets beckon
bleed no more you pretty pen
line your heart with gold
stories skillfully written
but never heard
lay her down
and into beauty blow
lay her down
to places never known

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Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2016 at 9:47 AM I loved reading this one with its great imagery, Tim.

Arthur Vaso November 12, 2016 at 4:47 PM great write, I think I may have read a few meanings in this!

Charmaine Chircop November 12, 2016 at 6:54 AM Yes I can visualize the sunset being laid down into places unknown. A fave here..This is so beautiful.

John Lawless November 11, 2016 at 9:08 PM Well if this doesn't get the sunsets a raise nothing will. Great job Tim...I've read it three times and each time my grin grows softer and wider.

White Wolf November 11, 2016 at 8:47 PM A great golden pen you have to my friend. Beautiful imagery.

Alexis Y. November 11, 2016 at 7:10 PM Hi Tim, You have penned such a beautiful sunset, and liked what I saw. Well done:-) Alexis

Daniel Turner November 11, 2016 at 6:39 PM I love colorful sunsets! We get some some pretty nice ones here but west Texas is where the colors are. Really nice Tim:)

Chris Green November 11, 2016 at 5:49 PM Soft, beautiful and sensual Tim. This is one gorgeous sunset.