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Sunset Slumber

Written: November 18, 2023 _________________________________________________ An overcast cloak envelops the night. Then I unplug in a thick purple shape. Hot chamomile tea acts to soothe my plight. An overcast cloak envelops the night. Shut the ruckus slightly, I closed my sight. Balmy delicate streams through my drapes. An overcast cloak envelops the night. Then I unplug in a thick purple shape.

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Valsa George

Date: 11/18/2023 8:47:00 PM

A fantastic triolet. If you turn to triolets, there will be a string of them following. You need channelize your thoughts in a special form and henceforth a torrential flow ensues. Truly gifted, dear friend.

Paige Hind

Date: 11/18/2023 4:19:00 PM

This is absolutely amazing. I loved it- it reminded me a bit of Frost. Adore!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/18/2023 3:21:00 PM

what a dreamy Triolet poem (no pun intended). I found it soothing as I recall nights (rare) when I easily drift off to sleep. When I do, I feel the overcast cloak envelope me. Beautiful imagery and flowing rhyme scheme. Am faving this one for when I need something relaxing to read. Have a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/18/2023 1:18:00 PM

You had a front row seat to witness the splendor. Great images, my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/18/2023 9:19:00 AM

A fantastic triolet. The rhyme was perfect.