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When sunset red unfurls and glows each beam an opal groove and veil, till August floats in warm repose when sunset red unfurls and glows. The nightingales warble in rows Bewitching hours as I exhale; When sunset red unfurls and glows each beam an opal groove and veil. Andrea Dietrich's One Lovely Summer Triolet 5/29/2015.

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/13/2015 8:46:00 PM

Your words paint a beautiful picture, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 6:27:00 PM

NETTE, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2015 5:37:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2015 12:53:00 AM

Very beautiful, Nette. The warble line threw off your meter. Otherwise, I'd have placed this higher! Congrats and thanks for supporting my contest.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/13/2015 12:41:00 AM

You have penned a beautiful piece. What an amazing sunset. Congrats on your win :) Alexis

Sneha Rv

Date: 6/1/2015 8:51:00 AM

This is so pretty, dear Nette!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D

Paul Callus

Date: 5/31/2015 2:21:00 AM

Hi Nette! This visual has proved to be quite popular. Yours is one of the very best that I have read; it exudes warmth as it flows softly along. #7 Hugs // paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/30/2015 10:21:00 AM

What a fabulous write Nette, It's enjoyable as always. Thanks for shared, excellent piece,,,,,,,A M.

Judy Konos

Date: 5/30/2015 9:44:00 AM

Girl! I was strolling around SOUP by country...WOW Nette on Cloud 9 souping from the Philippines! Charice is from the Philippines..she sings so great...and so is this poem...Thanks....

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/29/2015 6:46:00 PM

Wow, this is absolutely beautiful, Nette. One of the best triolets I've seen so far. Good luck in the contest :)

Thomas Martin

Date: 5/29/2015 10:53:00 AM

Memorable poem! Liked your use of rhymes here.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/29/2015 8:59:00 AM

It is indeed lovely Nette! Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/29/2015 7:54:00 AM

So so beautiful Nette I can picture your image so vividly - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 5/29/2015 7:44:00 AM

Nette, I know how difficult this form is (at least for me) but on reading yours I think "damn, she makes it look and read so easy"

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/29/2015 7:36:00 AM

Wow. Just perfect, Nette. Loved this! huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/29/2015 3:25:00 AM

- A beautiful sunset that glows in your words, Nette - Enjoy reading - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)