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Sunset Lullaby

As I lie on a blanket in my special place far from other members of the human race, a gentle wind dries my tear-stained face. The troubles that have occupied my mind and jangled my nerves fade as I unwind. I smile as I feel welcomed by many kind creatures—chattering squirrels, silent rabbits and deer-- and soothed at sunset by the music I hear an ethereal lullaby by birds so near. Seeing this human drifting into sleep, they have no fear. posted March 6, 2018 entered in Vermillion Scythe's Lullaby at Sunset contest March 6, 2018 and Brian Strand's Mid-March 18 Standard Contest March 12, 2018

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Date: 3/15/2018 12:52:00 PM
- Gives a lovely feeling Janice, beautiful written :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/15/2018 1:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise! Janice
Date: 3/6/2018 8:58:00 AM
This is so peaceful and beautiful, Janice. I'm nodding off now xxoo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/6/2018 9:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike! Janice
Date: 3/6/2018 7:15:00 AM
Delightful poem, Janice. Great rhythm.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/6/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 3/6/2018 6:58:00 AM
A very soothing depiction. True with nature, and feeling at peace..well written, Janice..best for a win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/6/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

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