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Sunset

sun loses it's crispness
yellow fades to orange
to misty haze
slowly falling victim to the night
losing it's color completely
moon rises and replenishes darkness


july 19,2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/19/2012 3:58:00 PM
thanks for concentrating on the fundamentals - the Moon reflects the spirit of the Sun; a strange celetial symbiosis - J.A.B. 2012
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