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SUNSET
golden sun sinks low moon's pale crescent in the west stars start to twinkle silent forest deep moon's soft light upon its trees shadows stretch and yawn

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Date: 7/15/2025 4:11:00 PM
Lovely! Love "shadows stretch and yawn"
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/15/2025 4:15:00 PM
thank you for your kind words...appreciate your visit
Date: 7/15/2025 10:02:00 AM
Dear Sara, a lullaby in motion so soft, slow, and soul-deep. It certainly reads like a quiet moment between day and night where even the forest seems to exhale. I love how the moon's touch turns the trees into sleepy dreamers. You’ve bottled serenity in so few words, and it’s beautiful. With a quiet smile. Summer Blessings, My Dear Sara, Daniel
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/15/2025 4:00:00 PM
I appreciate your visit, Daniel, as swell as your thoughtful and kind words. Color me grateful! Wishing you a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 7/14/2025 10:49:00 PM
delightful haikus, great
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/15/2025 4:07:00 PM
thanks for visiting, Yann, and for commenting. Delighted you dropped by! enjoy your evening.
Date: 7/14/2025 5:42:00 PM
A delightful Haiku and picture too Sara… Beryl
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/15/2025 4:07:00 PM
thank you for visiting, Beryl, and for your kind words. Wishing you a pleasant evening!
Date: 7/14/2025 5:21:00 PM
Hi, Ma'am Sara. Your poem shows excellent lines of imagery.
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/15/2025 3:57:00 PM
aww, what a nice surprise to see you'd visited my page and commented. Thank you! have a pleasant evening.
Date: 7/14/2025 4:52:00 PM
Your imagery is a delight. I love reading your poetry, Sara. Thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs, Bill p.s. the picture is priceless, :-)
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/15/2025 3:56:00 PM
thank you, Bill, for your kind words. I always appreciate your comments...I thought you might like the picture! hugs,
Date: 7/14/2025 4:50:00 PM
Pretty haikus Sara
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/15/2025 3:55:00 PM
thank you, kind sir! I appreciate your visit and comments!

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