Sunset

A scarlet setting sun, bleeds upon pink cotton candy clouds clustering at Earth's edge; as though tethered to the night. Twilight starts to unveil the stars that twinkle, like faceted diamonds and moonbeams gild indigo waters gold. Muting all but one lonely cricket's chirp: silence imbues each shifting shadow with a growing feeling of dread. And a dark curtain descends until silhouettes merge: and ebony, starts to slowly fill in every single gap.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:45 AM
There is no sunset as beautiful as the one you paint my friend. Congratulations Emile! :)
Pinet Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Thanks, Linda; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Seeker Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 4:29 AM
Oh wow! Love this! Warmest congratulations on your win, Emile
Pinet Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Thanks, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 6:39 PM
What a captivatingly beautiful write Emile, one of your best a new fave for me! Congrats on your win!
Pinet Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Thanks, John; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:48 AM
- Beautifully described, Emile - Congratulations :) - hugs
Pinet Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 11:06 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 11:06 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Empress Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 8:08 AM
What a stunning picture to go with your absolutely magical double etheree! This is one of those etherees that left me captivated from the very first line, the kind of etheree I absolutely appreciate. Your use of colors to add beauty to the imagery and emotions you’ve painted is beyond artistic! Every word in this would touch every sense of your readers. Thank you for sharing this impeccable write! Congratulations on winning! Well deserved win! Pleasure reading this!
Pinet Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 9:38 AM
What could I possibly say after receiving praise like this? Thank you so much Ink Empress for your wonderful review and placement... as always, your comments are welcomed and appreciated. Emile.
Lane Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 9:33 AM
Oh, Emile. There's such emotion in your etherees. You set the mood with scenes of light trying to illuminate the night. Shifting shadows and feelings of dread, but the line that touched me most to give the sense of loneliness is of the lone cricket's chirp. Excellent poetry, but then, I never expect less from you.
Pinet Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Thank you, Lin. You never fail to bring a smile to my day, and I so appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Beautiful in form and imagery! Wow! Should be on the winner’s list!
Pinet Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Thanks, Kim, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
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