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Sunset

late shadows on the wall- day foresees night fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/26/2009 2:37:00 PM
love this write Bryan...
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Date: 2/26/2009 1:33:00 AM
Neat imagery... perfect form and flow. Well done Brian! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/24/2009 12:12:00 PM
Such a poet you are, and with such seamlessness~ Lovely job! You write so candidly, and to the point with this write~ Great imagery with your shadows on the wall...a clever Lanterne from you~ Makes me want to write one. he he he Really though, this is good work Mr. Brian. Always your friend at the shhhoupie, Jane
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Date: 2/24/2009 12:09:00 PM
Nice Lanterne....all wrapped up nicely in your description~ Enjoyed this quick savvy write~ Take care... jane
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Date: 2/24/2009 6:47:00 AM
Abosutely beautiful, Brian. Picturesque and perfect in form. Love, Robin
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Date: 2/24/2009 1:37:00 AM
Nice poem, I like watching sunsets...Raul
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Date: 2/23/2009 5:57:00 AM
The imagery is so clear and the form perfect! Michael
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Date: 2/23/2009 5:42:00 AM
A lovely visual here Brian. Nice work. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/23/2009 4:30:00 AM
That is beautiful writing.. I love the shawdows on the wall and giving day the ability to know night is coming.. wonderful writing.
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