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Waltz Wave
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A blood-stained sun slowly starts to sink into a sea of ebony as shadows ink silhouettes pitch black and a white moon blossoms amidst the twinkling stars. (Waltz Wave) 8/31/2021

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/2/2023 3:42:00 PM

A beautiful sunset and rising moon my friend Emile. :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2023 7:58:00 PM

Thanks, Linda, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2023 1:31:00 PM

Emile, a beautiful wave, and great example for your contest, blessings, Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2023 7:58:00 PM

Thanks, Constance, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/2/2021 1:16:00 AM

Beautiful writing again, Emile, you make the sunset seem even more lovely with your words:)

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/2/2021 10:37:00 AM

Thanks, Jo, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/1/2021 11:41:00 AM

This is breathtaking! I love it. You always amaze me with your words. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2021 1:26:00 PM

Thanks so much, Regina, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Gary Radice

Date: 8/31/2021 2:25:00 PM

I agree with all the comments below Emile - such lovely flowing imagery and words that 'dance' on the page. Cheers - Gary

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2021 4:21:00 PM

Thanks, Gary, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/31/2021 11:20:00 AM

You keep doing it, Emile. A lovely poem I enjoyed reading. Superb imagery.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2021 4:20:00 PM

Thanks, Milt, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/31/2021 10:24:00 AM

The blossom of a white moon in the dark! God is good that way, dear poet!

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2021 4:20:00 PM

Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Chetta Achara

Date: 8/31/2021 10:16:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, beautifully written!

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2021 4:19:00 PM

Thanks, Chetta, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.