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Sunset

sketches of crimson break through the peaks
underneath amethyst tones of dusky skies
nesting in the middle, cascading down
sun submerges itself into the ocean's depths
eternal glow from tangerine waves beckons me
tempting me to follow the benign glow of setting sun



Sept 1, 2019

Writing Challenge 4, August 2019 - Six Lines
Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode

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Constance La France Date: 9/3/2019 3:25:00 PM Sandra, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Acrostic poem so beautifully penned . Well Done ! Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/3/2019 4:18:00 PM Thank you Dear Heart and thank you for hosting yet again another wonderful contest :) hugs

Jan Allison Date: 9/2/2019 5:10:00 PM I adore watching sunrise and sunsets, such breathtaking imagery Sandra, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/2/2019 7:34:00 PM Thank you Jan, same here, everyone is unique, i am in awe when the amethyst shades are layered in with the pinks and reds... hugs :)

John Hamilton Date: 9/2/2019 1:41:00 PM How much beauty you packed in six lines, again your acrostic flows so well unless I knew it was an acrostic I would never know it from the seamless flow, well done congrats on another win! Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/2/2019 1:52:00 PM thanks again my friend for your heartfelt comments, i appreciate your visits and kind comments :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2019 12:21:00 PM - Congratulations on your great 2nd place, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/2/2019 12:46:00 PM Thank you my friend :) Hugs

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/2/2019 11:24:00 AM a simple beautiful acrostic of a sunset. Congrats on a top win. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/2/2019 12:45:00 PM Thank you Jeanne...the sunset and sunrise are always awe inspiring to me :) hugs

Brenda Chiri Date: 9/2/2019 11:10:00 AM Congrats on your win! Such beauty much deserved!;) Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/2/2019 12:44:00 PM Thank you Brenda, the skies are among my favorite things that nature offers us :) hugs

John Gondolf Date: 9/2/2019 10:36:00 AM I love the beautiful imagery you always have in your poetry, Sandy, and another ocean scene to pique my imagination. Congrats on your win my friend. Hugs, John Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/2/2019 12:43:00 PM Thank you John, what a sweet comment, i love nature and spend as much time as life allows, admiring its beauty...glad i could share it with you :) hugs

Chris Green Date: 9/2/2019 8:20:00 AM Mesmerizing, your poetic thoughts bring the awesome beauty of a sunset to full view. The horizons always seem to bring the most wonderful show at the end (and beginning) of each day. Wonderfully crafted Sandra Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/2/2019 9:00:00 AM Sunrises and sunsets just seem to make the day feel more complete, I try and take in as many as I can, thank you :) hugs

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 9/1/2019 3:28:00 PM Lovely piece Sandra, full of great imagery and insight, a real great acrostic piece. poetry hugs, Gordon Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/1/2019 4:55:00 PM Thank you Gordon, i love sunsets and sunrises, they are among some of nature's best paintings :) hugs

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/1/2019 2:17:00 PM Superb imagery in your acrostic, Sandy..I see the sunset in your words--well done my friend. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/1/2019 2:31:00 PM Thank you my friend...the sun setting and rising over the ocean are some of my favorite things to see, always such awe inspiring beauty to behold.... :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/1/2019 1:50:00 PM - A beautiful sunset in amethyst tones, Sandra :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/1/2019 2:29:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise...i so love the sunset especially when the purple hues are mixed in :) hugs