Sunset

sketches of crimson break through the peaks underneath amethyst tones of dusky skies nesting in the middle, cascading down sun submerges itself into the ocean's depths eternal glow from tangerine waves beckons me tempting me to follow the benign glow of setting sun Sept 1, 2019 Writing Challenge 4, August 2019 - Six Lines Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode

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Constance La France

Date: 9/3/2019 3:25:00 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Acrostic poem so beautifully penned . Well Done !

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/3/2019 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Dear Heart and thank you for hosting yet again another wonderful contest :) hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2019 5:10:00 PM

I adore watching sunrise and sunsets, such breathtaking imagery Sandra, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 7:34:00 PM

Thank you Jan, same here, everyone is unique, i am in awe when the amethyst shades are layered in with the pinks and reds... hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 9/2/2019 1:41:00 PM

How much beauty you packed in six lines, again your acrostic flows so well unless I knew it was an acrostic I would never know it from the seamless flow, well done congrats on another win!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 1:52:00 PM

thanks again my friend for your heartfelt comments, i appreciate your visits and kind comments :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2019 12:21:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 12:46:00 PM

Thank you my friend :) Hugs

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/2/2019 11:24:00 AM

a simple beautiful acrostic of a sunset. Congrats on a top win.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 12:45:00 PM

Thank you Jeanne...the sunset and sunrise are always awe inspiring to me :) hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/2/2019 11:10:00 AM

Congrats on your win! Such beauty much deserved!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 12:44:00 PM

Thank you Brenda, the skies are among my favorite things that nature offers us :) hugs

John Gondolf

Date: 9/2/2019 10:36:00 AM

I love the beautiful imagery you always have in your poetry, Sandy, and another ocean scene to pique my imagination. Congrats on your win my friend. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 12:43:00 PM

Thank you John, what a sweet comment, i love nature and spend as much time as life allows, admiring its beauty...glad i could share it with you :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 9/2/2019 8:20:00 AM

Mesmerizing, your poetic thoughts bring the awesome beauty of a sunset to full view. The horizons always seem to bring the most wonderful show at the end (and beginning) of each day. Wonderfully crafted Sandra

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 9:00:00 AM

Sunrises and sunsets just seem to make the day feel more complete, I try and take in as many as I can, thank you :) hugs

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/1/2019 3:28:00 PM

Lovely piece Sandra, full of great imagery and insight, a real great acrostic piece. poetry hugs, Gordon

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/1/2019 4:55:00 PM

Thank you Gordon, i love sunsets and sunrises, they are among some of nature's best paintings :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/1/2019 2:17:00 PM

Superb imagery in your acrostic, Sandy..I see the sunset in your words--well done my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/1/2019 2:31:00 PM

Thank you my friend...the sun setting and rising over the ocean are some of my favorite things to see, always such awe inspiring beauty to behold.... :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2019 1:50:00 PM

- A beautiful sunset in amethyst tones, Sandra :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/1/2019 2:29:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise...i so love the sunset especially when the purple hues are mixed in :) hugs