Sunset

Walking hand in hand 'long the quay, We enjoy the cool breeze, A big ship's anchored faraway, We head toward the seas, Watching the grey and orange skies, Our problems we forget, Together in all lows and highs, We move towards sunset. 04/12/19 Picture #3 Free verse or rhyme poetry in its beauty contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/11/2019 2:21:00 PM

Lovely penning on the beauty of sunset Jo, just back from week in Cyprus where at evening meal saw the sun going down at seven pm , simply stunning!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/9/2019 9:48:00 AM

Beautiful reading.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2019 11:30:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/23/2019 8:09:00 PM

Beautiful Jo. I chose that picture too. Congratulations on your deserving first place win! : ) xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 4/23/2019 7:17:00 PM

Jo , congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative Rhyme of Vienna and her husband Aldo! The imagery and flow are beautiful. Hugs Eve ~`*

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/13/2019 1:42:00 PM

Sunset hues and vanishing blues in the blowing breeze life may soften into ease and blessing come two by two's.... Love your wonderful verses my great friend... A fav, a glistening gem too

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/12/2019 12:27:00 PM

Hello Jo Daniel, this poem is beautifully written about a couple in the sunset together. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/12/2019 7:05:00 AM

Very beautiful and romantic! Lovely imagery!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/12/2019 5:37:00 AM

Sunset becomes even more beautiful when one walks hand in hand with the person he/she is in love! Excellent imagery dearest little sister, Jo! Hugs xxx