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Sun's Flash

From my window morning arrives; Bringing a flashed ray of sunrise Along with gold lilies And pearl-like carnations. Darting out, I gasp heavily Fiery beams of heat char my skin. May 23rd 2020 Nette Onclaud's Contest HEXASTICH IT

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Date: 11/2/2020 8:30:00 PM
Great introduction with great imagery and feel, Lyva. I see congratulations were in order at the time. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/30/2020 12:02:00 PM
is it summer over there?...well expressed, lyva and congrats on your win in my contest... huggs!
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Date: 5/30/2020 11:56:00 AM
Oh this turned out to be scorching, hope your beautiful words heal your skin. Congratulations on your win Lyva :)
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Date: 5/29/2020 11:57:00 PM
Beautifully penned..May be when you got ready and dart out, it could be noon..lol..Congrats Lyva..
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