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Sunrise Yellow and Gold


The dawn sun rose yellow and gold,
   And soft light pours in my window;
The sun is rising up so bold,
      I puff up my cozy pillow.

My cat has found a patch of sun,
   She is busy with her gray fur;
Get up before sunrise is done,
      Although in bed I would prefer.

Twittering drifts from the birdbath,
   And trees are misty and dappled;
I will walk the lush garden path,
      My flowers glowing and tangled.

Sun breaks free of a swirling cloud,
   Oh sweet golden sunshine streaming;
High up in the sky now so proud,
       And from my bed I come creeping.

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October 16, 2016

Quatrain  (abab)

For the contest, Three choices, Plus Two
Sponsor,  Sara Kendrick

Second Place
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Dutta Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Congrats B.O. to win on your wonderful poem. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Your choice from the five choices is an excellent one in my book..I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..Congrats on your placement..Sara
White Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 1:55 AM
Such a wonderful morning, I can see your cat just doing that. Congratulations :)
Wigley Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 7:18 AM
The loveliest of mornings, written so beautifully, BW. Souldn't need any luck at all. Viv x
Kannan Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:17 AM
So beautiful... Loved your poem and I could relate with everything you said...A big 7...Good luck with the contest....
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 4:54 AM
That is a beautiful poem /|\
Sands Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:50 PM
I like your poetry. Beautiful. Thanks
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:38 PM
oh yours is so lovely. I must go try to figure out her contest rules and try this. I am caught up with most of the contests I WANTED to do. Except for yours and two others. But there are other contests I will try later in the week though I am not as excited about them. Gotta take off for a while and hope to come back here and finish my comments! I am SO BEHIND, Constance. Loved this poem and your response to my limerick!
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