Sunrise Senryu

The smell of waffles, Intoxicating syrup. Dog, licking my leg. 12/18/2921

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Elena Eagle

Date: 12/18/2021 8:40:00 AM

How fun! I can actually smell these delicious waffles.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/18/2021 1:40:00 PM

I just can can tell you like waffles.. Thank you for commenting. Pangie xo

Bill Baker

Date: 12/18/2021 7:43:00 AM

Sounds like a great start to a Saturday morning to me. :-) Well written and clear expression of emotion and imagery. Have a great weekend, Pangie Your new poet friend, Bill I'm following you now. :-)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/18/2021 7:54:00 AM

Love you new follower, you. Lost a poet friend last week, for no reason. So you are welcome to fill that hurt! I am a Pisces and sensitive, Appreciate the clarity of your comment. I feel if we know a language, for heavens sake use it. Cookie cutter comments show, no interest.waste of time.. Christmas love, Pangie. Xoxo