Sunrise and Sunset Routines

Breaking up the day into coffee and cabernet,
energy and relaxation, sunrise and sunset routines.
—by poet

Sunrise coffee, percolating,
poured into four seasons.
As soon as the mug’s drained,
brush pearly teeth, slide frothy floss,
Touch the sky where the sun should be;
the reach of xanthous rays.
Leftover steam from coffee-up -
blow on the sky; blue hue.

Cabernet in late afternoon;
cerise-cheers at sunset.
Dress down in seasonal pjs.
Brush pearls ‘til they sparkle.
Touch the sky where the moon should be -
the soothe of milky-white.
Remains a drop, dark berry -
the twilight sky infused.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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May 18, 2025 at 7:32 AM
The way in which you changed a mundane day into a vibrant fantasy place amazes me. What a brilliant piece of writing. You deserve this win, so congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 10:25 AM
Oh thank you so much, my friend! Do you kniw how much you are appreciated?! :)
Guptar Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations dear poetess on your high placement in this poetry contest with an intelligent take to carve out a lovely poem on one`s daily routines. Some of the verses bring smiles to the lips, notwithstanding the fact that routines may vary across diverse souls. Wishing you a delightful weekend, breaking the routines.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 5:27 AM
Thank you, Krishnanand! The routines, like you say vary, whether under the sun or the moon. God bless you!
Anaya Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 9:46 AM
I love how you've woven a common routine into a gift ,packaged with nature's beauty, a berry bow on top, i love both coffee and cabernet. just gotta say Cheers! Oh and congratulations on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 5:27 AM
Cheers and Thank You! Hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 8:46 AM
- Congratulations on your sixteen beautiful lines poem, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 5:28 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:05 PM
What a creative quote and write. Love Both... Have a fun day/week writing away...............
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, Paula! You always bring a smile :) Happy Sunday!
Greenhough Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 4:41 PM
I'm astounded in the way you turned a simple day into a colorful fantasy world. This is an amazing write.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 7:06 PM
Thank you kindly, Hilda! xx
Sands Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 4:32 AM
I love this poem. Great routine. I have one too. I enjoyed this. Well written :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 5:32 AM
Thank you, Heidi! <3
Puddifoot Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 3:02 AM
enjoyed reading this one - always unique angles and phraseology from you :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 5:32 AM
I appreciate you, Charlotte! <3
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 12:37 AM
The day truly breaks itself. Morning coffee lets me reach the sky. Great write, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Thank you, Subimal! Hugs
Buehler Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 11:16 PM
I love the whimsy and charm of this poem, Kim. As a coffee lover, I can relate. :D
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Thank you, dear friend! You made me smile “whimsy”
Hind Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 6:31 PM
Time for my Kim checkup (checkout) lol. Your poetry is beautiful, and it's always easy to say, dear Kim. This is a breath of fresh air. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 8:23 PM
Thank you kindly, dear one <3
Lane Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 8:17 AM
Sounds like a plan I'd like to enjoy. You want company, Kim? I'll bring some cab and pjs... slumber party!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 9:33 AM
LOL…yes! ;)
DiMino Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 7:58 AM
Perfect day gone by, and a perfect evening to kick back -- life is sometimes, just perfect! Forgiving attitude is the Key -- holding a grudge can turn a blush couch into a bed of nails, the best wine to vinegar. Blessings my friend. Delightful read.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 9:34 AM
Yes, pray and let go! Hugs :)
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