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Sunrise and Sunset Routines

Breaking up the day into coffee and cabernet, energy and relaxation, sunrise and sunset routines. —by poet Sunrise coffee, percolating, poured into four seasons. As soon as the mug’s drained, brush pearly teeth, slide frothy floss, Touch the sky where the sun should be; the reach of xanthous rays. Leftover steam from coffee-up - blow on the sky; blue hue. Cabernet in late afternoon; cerise-cheers at sunset. Dress down in seasonal pjs. Brush pearls ‘til they sparkle. Touch the sky where the moon should be - the soothe of milky-white. Remains a drop, dark berry - the twilight sky infused.

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Date: 5/18/2025 7:32:00 AM
The way in which you changed a mundane day into a vibrant fantasy place amazes me. What a brilliant piece of writing. You deserve this win, so congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2025 10:25:00 AM
Oh thank you so much, my friend! Do you kniw how much you are appreciated?! :)
Date: 5/17/2025 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations dear poetess on your high placement in this poetry contest with an intelligent take to carve out a lovely poem on one`s daily routines. Some of the verses bring smiles to the lips, notwithstanding the fact that routines may vary across diverse souls. Wishing you a delightful weekend, breaking the routines.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2025 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, Krishnanand! The routines, like you say vary, whether under the sun or the moon. God bless you!
Date: 5/17/2025 9:46:00 AM
I love how you've woven a common routine into a gift ,packaged with nature's beauty, a berry bow on top, i love both coffee and cabernet. just gotta say Cheers! Oh and congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2025 5:27:00 AM
Cheers and Thank You! Hugs :)
Date: 5/17/2025 8:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your sixteen beautiful lines poem, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2025 5:28:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 5/12/2025 12:05:00 PM
What a creative quote and write. Love Both... Have a fun day/week writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2025 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, Paula! You always bring a smile :) Happy Sunday!
Date: 5/11/2025 4:41:00 PM
I'm astounded in the way you turned a simple day into a colorful fantasy world. This is an amazing write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2025 7:06:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Hilda! xx
Date: 5/11/2025 4:32:00 AM
I love this poem. Great routine. I have one too. I enjoyed this. Well written :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2025 5:32:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi! <3
Date: 5/11/2025 3:02:00 AM
enjoyed reading this one - always unique angles and phraseology from you :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2025 5:32:00 AM
I appreciate you, Charlotte! <3
Date: 5/11/2025 12:37:00 AM
The day truly breaks itself. Morning coffee lets me reach the sky. Great write, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2025 5:34:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal! Hugs
Date: 5/10/2025 11:16:00 PM
I love the whimsy and charm of this poem, Kim. As a coffee lover, I can relate. :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2025 5:34:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend! You made me smile “whimsy”
Date: 5/10/2025 6:31:00 PM
Time for my Kim checkup (checkout) lol. Your poetry is beautiful, and it's always easy to say, dear Kim. This is a breath of fresh air. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2025 8:23:00 PM
Thank you kindly, dear one <3
Date: 5/10/2025 8:17:00 AM
Sounds like a plan I'd like to enjoy. You want company, Kim? I'll bring some cab and pjs... slumber party!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2025 9:33:00 AM
LOL…yes! ;)
Date: 5/10/2025 7:58:00 AM
Perfect day gone by, and a perfect evening to kick back -- life is sometimes, just perfect! Forgiving attitude is the Key -- holding a grudge can turn a blush couch into a bed of nails, the best wine to vinegar. Blessings my friend. Delightful read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2025 9:34:00 AM
Yes, pray and let go! Hugs :)

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