Sunrise

Hello daybreak, good gracious sunrise!
the many harbingers of life
seamless at the hems like satin threads
weaving carpets of morn's carousel rides…

fluffy,
fluted 
and fiery.

This journey embedded by walks
where dewdrops upon toes
tickle on the grandeur of new dreams--
a magical discovery enshrined
on souls bathed in the brink of hope:


if your time is like mine
varnished as the radiant sunrise
hiding beneath aerie branches of hillsides
powerful yet gentle--
then sing with me,
till the light breaks into million auroral strobes
while baby clouds knight  leaps of a heart
and smile at the fondle of twirling leaves.

Ring the bell for some minutes as a roulette 
of glossed frames wend through an endless, sinless  blaze…

slowly,
softly,
subtly.


Contest:Silent One's Sunrise or Sunset
2/17/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Congrats on your well deserved winwith this beauty, nette.
Callus Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Your creative imagination has been given free rein, Nette! I would willingly sing with you, captivated by the beauty of this sunrise and the fondle of twirling leaves! Congratulations on your top win. Hugs // paul
Poteet Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Beautiful thought, nette, the carousel ride. Congrats on your win. I sing too, though the sun remains hidden behind the clouds most of these days.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:45 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your great first position win.
Haight Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 5:33 PM
Beautiful, Nette. Congrats on your First Placed win. Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Nette :)
Ashley Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 3:28 PM
Sunrise dressed in the alluring attire of your gorgeous imagery Nette.. Congratulations on your first place win! ~ Susan
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:24 PM
- Hurray, at the top of the list :))) - Congratulations, Nette !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
S     Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Beautiful Nette! Congrats on your win! ~Judy
One Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Lovely poem Nette, congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 9:14 PM
I like your brief lines entwined with imagery! Nice!
Pandit Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Lovely imagery of morning and sunrise..well written, nette..best for a win.
Wanter Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Mesmerising!
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Beautifully written poem, nette. A charmer. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 2:47 PM
- Described with love, Nette ... beautiful :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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