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Sunrise

Hello daybreak, good gracious sunrise! the many harbingers of life seamless at the hems like satin threads weaving carpets of morn's carousel rides… fluffy, fluted and fiery. This journey embedded by walks where dewdrops upon toes tickle on the grandeur of new dreams-- a magical discovery enshrined on souls bathed in the brink of hope: if your time is like mine varnished as the radiant sunrise hiding beneath aerie branches of hillsides powerful yet gentle-- then sing with me, till the light breaks into million auroral strobes while baby clouds knight leaps of a heart and smile at the fondle of twirling leaves. Ring the bell for some minutes as a roulette of glossed frames wend through an endless, sinless blaze… slowly, softly, subtly. Contest:Silent One's Sunrise or Sunset 2/17/2018

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Date: 4/9/2018 2:09:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved winwith this beauty, nette.
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Date: 2/21/2018 2:00:00 PM
Your creative imagination has been given free rein, Nette! I would willingly sing with you, captivated by the beauty of this sunrise and the fondle of twirling leaves! Congratulations on your top win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/19/2018 7:32:00 AM
Beautiful thought, nette, the carousel ride. Congrats on your win. I sing too, though the sun remains hidden behind the clouds most of these days.
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your great first position win.
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Date: 2/18/2018 5:33:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette. Congrats on your First Placed win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/18/2018 4:05:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Nette :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 3:28:00 PM
Sunrise dressed in the alluring attire of your gorgeous imagery Nette.. Congratulations on your first place win! ~ Susan
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:24:00 PM
- Hurray, at the top of the list :))) - Congratulations, Nette !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:21:00 PM
Beautiful Nette! Congrats on your win! ~Judy
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:43:00 AM
Lovely poem Nette, congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/16/2018 9:14:00 PM
I like your brief lines entwined with imagery! Nice!
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Date: 2/16/2018 6:50:00 PM
Lovely imagery of morning and sunrise..well written, nette..best for a win.
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Date: 2/16/2018 5:51:00 PM
Mesmerising!
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Date: 2/16/2018 4:27:00 PM
Beautifully written poem, nette. A charmer. Well done.
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Date: 2/16/2018 2:47:00 PM
- Described with love, Nette ... beautiful :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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