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Sunrise

Bright
Sunshine
Dawn to dusk
Colours our world
With a golden glow
Without sun we would die
Nature basks in its glory 
Scintillating sunlight for life

1st April 2015

beautylifesunetheree

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Alexia Rowell

August 18, 2015 at 8:58 PM

Very amazing.

Jan Allison

August 19, 2015 at 3:59 AM

Oh thanks you so much Alexia:-) hugs jan xx

Sharon Gulley

April 13, 2015 at 9:14 AM

Bright and beautiful write here Jan. Love the sunny imagery...Sharon G.

Jan Allison

April 13, 2015 at 9:23 AM

Thank you so much Sharon I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

April 4, 2015 at 12:28 PM

Boy oh boy Jan, your words are simply glowing with this beautiful poem, love it, for it's left a glowing aura around your words, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison

April 4, 2015 at 12:31 PM

Thanks James in truth I wrote it originally for the illumination contest but posted another poem in its place - I also discovered I had the form incorrect - I had line 5 with 5 syllables not one so I extended it to an etheree and am so pleased with the final result:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

April 3, 2015 at 6:04 PM

Stunning! A brilliant write, excellent!

Jan Allison

April 3, 2015 at 6:09 PM

oh you are too kind my friend:-) I write 'simple' poems but they are written from the heart Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 3, 2015 at 8:51 AM

lovely sunlight.. :)! I like it when it's sunny though it really is getting hot nowadays still i prefer it.. :)!

Jan Allison

April 3, 2015 at 8:52 AM

I just wish our Island had a little bit more of a tropical temperature - I love warm days but not too hot:-) Hugs Jan x

William Gray

April 3, 2015 at 3:47 AM

Lovely warm and bright -just like you Jan!. Best wishes my friend!.xx

Jan Allison

April 3, 2015 at 4:49 AM

Aww I've got a golden glow inside from that comment William thank you *** blushes *** :-) Hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

April 2, 2015 at 5:34 PM

what a fine piece reminding me of easter's glory... have a good one , jan.. huggs

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 5:39 PM

Thanks so much Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Shaw

April 2, 2015 at 2:25 PM

This is so enervating, Jan! Just makes me want to take in a deep, contented breath of life. A def *7* for me. Hugs, Kimberly

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 2:27 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Kimberly I think this is my second attempt at this form:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

April 2, 2015 at 9:37 AM

I love this, Jan. So beautifully expressed and so very true. 7+Fav. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 12:34 PM

Thanks Sandra I think the final line is so so apt! Hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

April 2, 2015 at 8:13 AM

Simply beautiful, Jan. Perfect imagery. A 7, for you, as always. Kim :)

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 8:16 AM

Thanks Kim it was a poem I started for the illumination contest - i posted another and continued with this my original idea and made it into an Etheree to get more experience in the form:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

April 2, 2015 at 5:26 AM

I love the form, the picture and mainly, the poem!!! c:

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 5:43 AM

Thanks so much Sneha always a pleasure to see you visit my page:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

April 2, 2015 at 3:44 AM

Yes, Jan, sunlight gives life, not only to vegetation, but also to us humans who wait for spring and summer to recharge our batteries. // Great choice of visual, too! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 5:42 AM

Exactly my thoughts Paul - we couldn't survive without it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

April 2, 2015 at 3:08 AM

:) Love the sun. I've written many poems on this theme. This is a beauty, Jan....Sunrise brings hope. Hugs, sweetie.

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 5:41 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Eileen - it is a lovely spring day here the sun is shining and I'm feeling soooooooo good i could shout it from the rooftops:-) hugs Jan xxx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

April 1, 2015 at 11:06 PM

A lovely etheree, Jan! Hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 2:25 AM

Thanks so much Rhonda - i think it is only my second attempt at this form:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

April 1, 2015 at 10:50 PM

beautiful poem to go with a beautiful picture, Jan.

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 2:25 AM

Thanks Andrea I do appreciate you feedback i am constantly learning and trying to improve my writing:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 1, 2015 at 10:34 PM

True and uplifting write Jan! Great work!

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 2:24 AM

I agree Dr Sharma - we need the sun for life:-) I struggled with the last 2 words - then inspiration hit :-) Hugs Jan xx

John Hardison

April 1, 2015 at 10:06 PM

WAS Not famliar Etheree form. Covers picture well. Nicely written. Thanks much

Jan Allison

April 2, 2015 at 2:22 AM

Thanks John it is only the second one I've written:-) If you have a go at the contests you learn so many new forms - i enjoy the challenge:-) Hugs jan xx

Tammy Reams

April 1, 2015 at 6:57 PM

This poem goes great with the picture. A beautiful write.

Jan Allison

April 1, 2015 at 7:00 PM

Thanks Tammy I write the poems then find a suitable picture:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

April 1, 2015 at 6:23 PM

Lovely Jan, I love it with the pic too. Thinking about trying some new forms too, Maybe this will be a good one to use. (HUGs) and thanks for commenting on my silliness! ~jan

Jan Allison

April 1, 2015 at 6:27 PM

I wrote an Etheree for a contest so I thought I would challenge myself to write another for fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

April 1, 2015 at 5:59 PM

beautiful Jan and the picture accentuates the poem...hugs Tim

Jan Allison

April 1, 2015 at 6:08 PM

I originally started this for the illumination contest but posted another one I'd done and just continued this one in the Etheree form - think its the second one I've written:-) Hugs jan xx

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