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Bright Sunshine Dawn to dusk Colours our world With a golden glow Without sun we would die Nature basks in its glory Scintillating sunlight for life 1st April 2015

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Date: 8/18/2015 8:58:00 PM
Very amazing.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/19/2015 3:59:00 AM
Oh thanks you so much Alexia:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/13/2015 9:14:00 AM
Bright and beautiful write here Jan. Love the sunny imagery...Sharon G.
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Date: 4/13/2015 9:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Sharon I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/4/2015 12:28:00 PM
Boy oh boy Jan, your words are simply glowing with this beautiful poem, love it, for it's left a glowing aura around your words, hugs//James xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/4/2015 12:31:00 PM
Thanks James in truth I wrote it originally for the illumination contest but posted another poem in its place - I also discovered I had the form incorrect - I had line 5 with 5 syllables not one so I extended it to an etheree and am so pleased with the final result:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/3/2015 6:04:00 PM
Stunning! A brilliant write, excellent!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/3/2015 6:09:00 PM
oh you are too kind my friend:-) I write 'simple' poems but they are written from the heart Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/3/2015 8:51:00 AM
lovely sunlight.. :)! I like it when it's sunny though it really is getting hot nowadays still i prefer it.. :)!
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Date: 4/3/2015 8:52:00 AM
I just wish our Island had a little bit more of a tropical temperature - I love warm days but not too hot:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 4/3/2015 3:47:00 AM
Lovely warm and bright -just like you Jan!. Best wishes my friend!.xx
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Date: 4/3/2015 4:49:00 AM
Aww I've got a golden glow inside from that comment William thank you *** blushes *** :-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/2/2015 5:34:00 PM
what a fine piece reminding me of easter's glory... have a good one , jan.. huggs
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Date: 4/2/2015 5:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/2/2015 2:25:00 PM
This is so enervating, Jan! Just makes me want to take in a deep, contented breath of life. A def *7* for me. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 4/2/2015 2:27:00 PM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Kimberly I think this is my second attempt at this form:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/2/2015 9:37:00 AM
I love this, Jan. So beautifully expressed and so very true. 7+Fav. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/2/2015 12:34:00 PM
Thanks Sandra I think the final line is so so apt! Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/2/2015 8:13:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Jan. Perfect imagery. A 7, for you, as always. Kim :)
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Date: 4/2/2015 8:16:00 AM
Thanks Kim it was a poem I started for the illumination contest - i posted another and continued with this my original idea and made it into an Etheree to get more experience in the form:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/2/2015 5:26:00 AM
I love the form, the picture and mainly, the poem!!! c:
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Date: 4/2/2015 5:43:00 AM
Thanks so much Sneha always a pleasure to see you visit my page:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/2/2015 3:44:00 AM
Yes, Jan, sunlight gives life, not only to vegetation, but also to us humans who wait for spring and summer to recharge our batteries. // Great choice of visual, too! Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/2/2015 5:42:00 AM
Exactly my thoughts Paul - we couldn't survive without it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/2/2015 3:08:00 AM
:) Love the sun. I've written many poems on this theme. This is a beauty, Jan....Sunrise brings hope. Hugs, sweetie.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/2/2015 5:41:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Eileen - it is a lovely spring day here the sun is shining and I'm feeling soooooooo good i could shout it from the rooftops:-) hugs Jan xxx
Date: 4/1/2015 11:06:00 PM
A lovely etheree, Jan! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 4/2/2015 2:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Rhonda - i think it is only my second attempt at this form:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/1/2015 10:50:00 PM
beautiful poem to go with a beautiful picture, Jan.
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Date: 4/2/2015 2:25:00 AM
Thanks Andrea I do appreciate you feedback i am constantly learning and trying to improve my writing:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/1/2015 10:34:00 PM
True and uplifting write Jan! Great work!
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Date: 4/2/2015 2:24:00 AM
I agree Dr Sharma - we need the sun for life:-) I struggled with the last 2 words - then inspiration hit :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/1/2015 10:06:00 PM
WAS Not famliar Etheree form. Covers picture well. Nicely written. Thanks much
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Date: 4/2/2015 2:22:00 AM
Thanks John it is only the second one I've written:-) If you have a go at the contests you learn so many new forms - i enjoy the challenge:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/1/2015 6:57:00 PM
This poem goes great with the picture. A beautiful write.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/1/2015 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Tammy I write the poems then find a suitable picture:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/1/2015 6:23:00 PM
Lovely Jan, I love it with the pic too. Thinking about trying some new forms too, Maybe this will be a good one to use. (HUGs) and thanks for commenting on my silliness! ~jan
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:27:00 PM
I wrote an Etheree for a contest so I thought I would challenge myself to write another for fun:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/1/2015 5:59:00 PM
beautiful Jan and the picture accentuates the poem...hugs Tim
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:08:00 PM
I originally started this for the illumination contest but posted another one I'd done and just continued this one in the Etheree form - think its the second one I've written:-) Hugs jan xx