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Sunrest

Sun has chased moon, East to West, past the poles. While warring thermals, cause thunder to roll. Evening breeze smells of salt, from a dry lake bed. Sky shimmers aquamarine, tinged in streaks of red. Rugged peaks, wind tortured, stand in stark relief. As last rays of sun, slip away, like a thief. Long, shadows grow, upon ground, ancient dust. Caressing, one last time, this land with gentle touch. For the contest: A Poesy any theme Sponsored by Brian Strand Placement: 1st

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Date: 7/19/2011 4:45:00 PM
Beautiful, Paula. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/19/2011 11:48:00 AM
oh I knew this was number one material Paula..congrats my friend...on beauty ..in poetry luv..
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Date: 7/19/2011 8:19:00 AM
Love it Paula..great descript... I see it all from the aerial vantage pint of you poetry. Well done and thanks for the guided tour trip. Congratulations. into my favs
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Date: 7/19/2011 6:51:00 AM
Congrats on 1st Place, Paula. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Brian Strand's "Poesy"contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 1:38:00 AM
congrats Paula on your win in Brians contest. Best wishes Em:)
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Date: 7/18/2011 11:06:00 PM
happy to share top spot with you, paula.. sweetest of cheers to you for the win! :)huggs!
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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