Sunrest

Sun has chased moon, East to West, past the poles.
While warring thermals, cause thunder to roll.

Evening breeze smells of salt, from a dry lake bed.
Sky shimmers aquamarine, tinged in streaks of red.

Rugged peaks, wind tortured, stand in stark relief.
As last rays of sun, slip away, like a thief.

Long, shadows grow, upon ground, ancient dust.
Caressing, one last time, this land with gentle touch.



For the contest: A Poesy any theme
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Placement: 1st
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George   Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Beautiful, Paula. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 11:48 AM
oh I knew this was number one material Paula..congrats my friend...on beauty ..in poetry luv..
Dufresne Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 8:19 AM
Love it Paula..great descript... I see it all from the aerial vantage pint of you poetry. Well done and thanks for the guided tour trip. Congratulations. into my favs
Taylor Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 6:51 AM
Congrats on 1st Place, Paula. Nice going. xxxRalph
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Brian Strand's "Poesy"contest. Love, Carol
Mantle Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 1:38 AM
congrats Paula on your win in Brians contest. Best wishes Em:)
Onclaud Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 11:06 PM
happy to share top spot with you, paula.. sweetest of cheers to you for the win! :)huggs!
Johnson Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 10:15 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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