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Sunny Daze

I gasp with my mouth open But it's much too dry to drool It feels like I just jumped off The deep end of an empty pool The sun beats down upon me A vial abomination I may have to fall and crawl To reach my destination I've been pushed to the limit As the sweat runs down my neck That was quite a marathon From the back yard to the deck!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/18/2019 6:12:00 PM
'Back yard to the deck' is a bit taxing for me these days... How about a few 12-ounce curls first?! Gotta get warmed up properly, you know. LOL. Another great one, Pat. Love your style. ~ gw
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Pat Adams
Date: 7/19/2019 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, I appreciate that!...............80)
Date: 7/16/2019 3:26:00 PM
I was thinking just recently 'Did my house grow or has the kitchen always been this far away?'
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Date: 7/16/2019 5:44:00 PM
I know right! Something in the air perhaps!...80)
Date: 7/11/2019 7:49:00 PM
G'day Pat … do you realize how many people you embarrassed here. I giggled all the way while responding and now I'm exhausted - great Pat - Lindsay
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Date: 7/12/2019 4:18:00 PM
Yep, well.....it's HOT, HOT, HOT outside, exit at your own risk!.........80)
Date: 7/11/2019 5:06:00 PM
LOL! You so had me ;D, xomo!
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Pat Adams
Date: 7/12/2019 4:17:00 PM
I should dare to dream!....Glad you liked it!.......pat

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