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sunny

sunset gently falls under the sky colors blend nature's soothing call newer cache of dreams descend yearning hopes waken transcend

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Date: 7/31/2024 9:27:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "sunny" Tanka/Acrostic write again. I love the pretty sunset time of the day. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 7/29/2024 3:08:00 PM
Jay this is a gorgeous tanka. I was expecting a tanka about sunshine. But instead it seemed geared to sunset and the night. That is the only reason it's not higher on my list. Thanks for your participation.
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Date: 7/10/2024 8:18:00 PM
Beautiful entry for the contest. A rhyming tanka and a lovely acrostic ! All the Best dear Jay ji
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Date: 7/9/2024 12:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "sunny" Tanka/Acrostic write. "Good Luck" Have a  fun day writing away............
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Date: 7/9/2024 11:11:00 AM
A Tanka, rhyme flows as the imagery unfolds, colors adorn the image and an uplifting ending. Faving this one, Jay!
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Date: 7/9/2024 11:00:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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