sunny

sunset gently falls
under the sky colors blend
nature's soothing call
newer cache of dreams descend
yearning  hopes waken transcend
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "sunny" Tanka/Acrostic write again. I love the pretty sunset time of the day. Have a blessed day writing away...........
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 3:08 PM
Jay this is a gorgeous tanka. I was expecting a tanka about sunshine. But instead it seemed geared to sunset and the night. That is the only reason it's not higher on my list. Thanks for your participation.
George Avatar
July 10, 2024 at 8:18 PM
Beautiful entry for the contest. A rhyming tanka and a lovely acrostic ! All the Best dear Jay ji
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 12:33 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "sunny" Tanka/Acrostic write. "Good Luck" Have a  fun day writing away............
Anaya Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 11:11 AM
A Tanka, rhyme flows as the imagery unfolds, colors adorn the image and an uplifting ending. Faving this one, Jay!
Meadows Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 11:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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